Ericas Night At The Bar

As Erica sat down at the bar to have a . She was feeling kind of , wishing she had a , but she figured the would do the trick. 1

After sitting there for about an hour, a , handsome man walked up and asked her to dance. As they went to the dance floor, she was like this guy is dreamy. Through the whole dance his arms were her so tightly, and every time he would look at her he would give her a . 2

She could have melted. Her feeling was long gone, replaced with a feeling of **. After the dance was over, he her long, soft, and hard at the same time. 3

She arrived home that night feeling , with her new man right by her side.

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Just a little love store useing emoticons. Hope you like it. I can't understand why the emoticons didn't post right, if anyone knows let me know.

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  • Snuggle-Bunny
    July 7
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    Aww, cute!


  • ArcticFox
    June 17
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    hahaha very cute!!!


  • theDARK1
    February 5

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    very lovely story and i enjoyed how you used your emoticons in place of the words as i think that's the way it was supposed to be done. good luck in the contest, DARK.


  • StarIlluminated
    February 3

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    ok that second line was really funny, I liked that a lot. This story was really sweet, and the emoticons were done very nicely. Good work.
    Illuminated *KT*


  • Miki Koishikawa
    February 1
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    aww


  • Midnight-In-Prayer
    February 1

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    Aww...I love sweet stories like this. Wonderful job. You used the emoticons perfectly too.

    Thank you for entering my contest!


  • SeleneStone gold member
    February 1

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    That was great! And such a sweet story to. I like how she ran into this great guy that made all of her pain that day seem to vanish. These smilie stories are really neat. You did a wonderful job on this one.


  • Ted E Bare
    January 31

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    I think it was truly a cute story and I remember those days going to the club! Getting a little lovey dovey myself out on the dance floor. Glad to see the sadness go to happiness. Good luck in the contest.

    Ted E

  • mcfreeman
    January 31
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    Unique

    a smiley story? You might be on to something. Kind of funny. In a paint by numbers way.

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