Animal Romance

I need some ! First, let me explain that I'm a . Sometimes I am and about my situation. I can't because of it. I'm in ! What's wrong with that you say You might think I'm or when I tell you. She is a ! No, I didn't say , I said a !!!!! I'm telling you 'cuz my shrink is a and he just and his head. At least I know you listen and don't run away from me when I tell you stuff. Guess it helps that you're a . So can you point me in the right direction. Am I barking up the wrong tree in this relationship? Does that mean you're thinking about your answer ? , thank you for the answer and being so about my ordeal. Your advice makes me ! I think I will her, no wait I will her instead. Better yet, I will go see her in person to give her a and some and maybe under the !

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emoticons on sw with the above link!

Hope all enjoys the little romantic story about a dog in love with a cat (and some added humor).

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  • nintendogsforever
    September 11, 2008
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    I lik ethe emoticons, too! Funny, LOL!
    of Hope,
    Dragon of Dawn


  • wolfgirl1
    February 6, 2008
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    LOL! i like the emoticons!


  • theDARK1
    February 5, 2008

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    liked your story! creative and charming as it goes in a very loving flow. itz cute that a dog falls in love with a cat. good luck in the contest, DARK.


  • Melissa Loves Jeffy
    February 1, 2008

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    This is a very entertaining piece and looks like it was very fun to make. Poor puppy is in love with what is usually dof food. May his monkey help him lol. This is very great and creative =). Keep writing!!


  • ennovy
    February 1, 2008

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    Well this one cheered me up, and I sure had a nice laugh about this dog (man) and the cat(girl) I saw it as a man trying to male up his mind on the next steps he would take in his relationship....'cause real cats & dogs don't get along unless raised together...This was a real clever write...loved it!... novy

    • Ted E Bare
      February 1, 2008
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      I fell in love with the contest and it was truly inspirational as you can tell. I also started a contest here with emoticons and hers is still open. I will also do one for AP soon. Thank you so much for such a great comment and your wonderful continuing supportTed E


  • Midnight-Engaged
    February 1, 2008

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    Aww, this was certainly cute! I love how it's a monologue, that really works for this. You used the emoticons well, and I loved how you acted like the turtle confused bat and cat.

    Overall, wonderful job! Thank you for entering my contest.

    • Ted E Bare
      February 1, 2008
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      Thank you for enjoying the story. I'm excited about hosting my own emoticon contest. I will host one on both sites; here and at AP. You're more than welcome to participate in both when I get them postedTed E


  • VirginiaDarling
    January 31, 2008

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    Very cool, story. I really love how you used the emoticons lol. Very nice story, also funny as well.

    • Ted E Bare
      January 31, 2008
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      Thank you for a very sweet comment. I couldn't fill in the stars for when I clicked on here only two of them showed up without any blank ones. I'm not sure why that happened


  • zhaniswolf
    January 31, 2008

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    rofl aww i love it. the best of luck to you. i'd enter but... HA! i barely even know my way around the emoticons here. i do love the story, as it could almost fit metaphorically into my life (old vs young). have at it, love, and good luck.


    • Ted E Bare
      January 31, 2008
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      Thank you very much for truly a sweet and loving commentTed E


  • IntrepidFantasy Greeters member
    January 31, 2008

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    Awwww that was so cute!! And sweet too. Such an adorable little emoticon story about a cat and a dog! I really hope you win this contest because that is just so creative and cute! I can tell you must be a romantic with the roses there and having a drink under the stars.

    beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.

    • Ted E Bare
      January 31, 2008
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      You can say I'm a huge romantic. I am known for my "Rain Girl" poems and erotica on AP. I truly thought this was a very creative contest and the host/hostess deserves so much credit for using their imagination to come up with such a contest that can inspire. I hope there are many more entries here that will be better than mine as this contest should be filled with lots of entries. Thank you so much for such a wonderful commentTed E

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