the price you pay for making friends with insanity

rain hit the window
like blood
hail hit the ground
like bones
a chill up my spine
called me to be alone
angels beneath me
trying to save me
demons above me
taking me with them
dangerous brown
mix with ruby red
and shining silver
pleas again
to be set free
from her prison, entombed
while the rain comes
to wash away
all my pain
as it soaks though
my skin
leaving stains
that nothing can
undo
like the stain
on my heart
but in the morning
blood like rain
will become dew
and no one
will ever
believe me
the life and torture of a girl who made peace with insanity

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  • the shorty
    January 28, 2008
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    this is cool. another one of your writings that just makes me go "brrr... that's kinda creepy."


    • lexiconsthedevil
      February 13, 2008
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      this was actually taken from that weird hallucination that i had. it really scared me but i have come to live with them. i guess they turn into great writes.


    • lexiconsthedevil
      January 28, 2008
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      umm...thanks i guess? naw i love writing creepy stuff!


  • forevermyangel14
    January 27, 2008
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    wow thats really good. i love the ending.