Remembering the Wake up

Every day I wake up and get up for a new day1

There used to be a time where I wished that I would just …2

Never wake up again, I was in pain3

As I think back on it now I can’t see why I was4

I am glad I wake up every day to see what happens5

Had I never woken up back then I would have missed so much6

My dreams would have never happened or even had a chance too7

I use to scream and get mad at myself over stupid things8

My anger hurt myself and others, just like my sadness9

Not knowing it really I broke away from my friends10

I forgot that they were my friends not my enemy11

Then came the day I woke up…12

I realized that I was going too far, I wanted to live13

I had to much planed to go and die now14

That day was great day15

Now it’s something in my past…16

There are still off days but I am fine17

My heart is not hurting now18

I am happy that, I ….19

Wake up every day to a new day20

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  • lottiemae
    March 26, 2008
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    good poem keep up the writings.


  • HaXXoR
    March 11, 2008
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    a really happy piece. with some bad memories from the past. it feels like you have found out how beautiful life. and that death aint a way to escape pain. wounds can heal.. all kind of wounds fysic and psycic.. it's just to give it time. i loved the feeling of it. every day is a new day. you never know what is waiting for you
    good job!

    keep up the good work


  • Xtclozer-
    March 1, 2008

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    It was good. Interesting, and unique. The rythem of the poem was good too, and it kept my interest.

    Keep writting, and thanks for etneringmy contest! good luck.


  • UnEdibleChick
    February 24, 2008

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    Yesh! Wake up for a new day!! this was good! although you didn't have much puncuation in there, it was good! Thanx for commenting on my story! I just thought I'd return the favor


  • GrimDeath
    February 20, 2008
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    Thank you


  • xBitterxSweetx
    February 19, 2008
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    This is so true. It cuts right into the point. It keeps a good rhythm. Great job!

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