Drop…drop… drop. The rhythmic tapping of the rain against your window immediately took to your annoyance as you rolled over to check the time. As you looked at the clock, mildly to your surprise it was ten O’ clock. Your eyes widened.1
“Snap!”2
You jumped out of bed only to meet the floor with a loud crash. You groaned and continued a reckless rendition of getting yourself ready and awake. Quickly adjusting your appearance more to your liking, you threw open the door stumbling down the stairs nearly crashing into wide eyed sister, who in her ordinary groggy trance looked more awake than usual.3
“Where’s the fire?” she stated plainly.4
“Ha-ha, very funny!” you stated not in the least bit amused.5
“Sorry…where are you headed?”6
“Ha’ri’s house, though I’m late!” you shouted, as you ran down the steep incline of the steps and ran out the door in the process. Before running off the porch through the estate, a hand grabbed your shoulder firmly swinging you backwards.7
“Do you want to catch a cold?” your sister exclaimed while throwing a coat in your face.8
“Whoops, thanks!” you laughed nervously. You ran through the estate careful not to be caught in any other inconvenience to delay your time with Ha’ri. By time you reached the Sohma estate the once gentle rain had turned itself into snow. You stopped, wanting to intake the beautiful, snow covered scenery. You were then surprised as to find yourself entwined into a passionate embrace. Immediately knowing who it was you returned the gentle, warm embrace.9
“Snap!”2
You jumped out of bed only to meet the floor with a loud crash. You groaned and continued a reckless rendition of getting yourself ready and awake. Quickly adjusting your appearance more to your liking, you threw open the door stumbling down the stairs nearly crashing into wide eyed sister, who in her ordinary groggy trance looked more awake than usual.3
“Where’s the fire?” she stated plainly.4
“Ha-ha, very funny!” you stated not in the least bit amused.5
“Sorry…where are you headed?”6
“Ha’ri’s house, though I’m late!” you shouted, as you ran down the steep incline of the steps and ran out the door in the process. Before running off the porch through the estate, a hand grabbed your shoulder firmly swinging you backwards.7
“Do you want to catch a cold?” your sister exclaimed while throwing a coat in your face.8
“Whoops, thanks!” you laughed nervously. You ran through the estate careful not to be caught in any other inconvenience to delay your time with Ha’ri. By time you reached the Sohma estate the once gentle rain had turned itself into snow. You stopped, wanting to intake the beautiful, snow covered scenery. You were then surprised as to find yourself entwined into a passionate embrace. Immediately knowing who it was you returned the gentle, warm embrace.9
Author notes
This is the first piece of writing I have done in an EXTREMELY x265034754603 long time! I know I have errors, but my friend has been hassling me to actually put something up. SO, here it is the first creation in years! I promise I will have something better soon! Positive feedback and tips are greatly welcomed! P.s. I tried writing it in third person,though I don't know how well that worked =\
Comments
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5/5
I'm proud to say I was that friend
Second person is the HARDEST way to write, yet you make it look easy.
I see no issues except for the fact that 'wide eyed' is to be hyphenated, ex. 'wide-eyed'.
...other than that I'm speechless.


