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-Happy birthday Chelsea! How's it feel to be sixteen?2
-I don't know, good, I guess.3
-Thats great! Guess what I've got!4
-Hmm?5
-Presents! And everyone you love is here to wish you a happy birthday!6
-Oh great! I haven't seen anyone in such a long time!7
-Well, come on! We've got cake, and ice cream, and after that is presents!8
-Yay!9
-Guess what else?10
-What?11
-We're taking you for your license!12
-Awesome! Thanks so much, this was the best birthday.13
-It was nothing. Wait until your eighteenth...now THAT'll be somethin.14
Author notes
This is a lil bit of microfiction....i found out i'm kinda good at it. meh.
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i did.....hmm, lemme see...michael....then michael again...then i opened presents....then michael...that enough for you? lol.
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so what all did you do on your birthday?
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hehe thanks....but actually my birthday was on sunday.
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Hey this is pretty cool. I am sorry that people ignore your birthday. That isn't fair. I wouldn't ignore it!! well that is if i actually knew when it was. well happy birthday!! i may be a few months too early or too late but who cares! lol. great job later
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uhm......this piece was a sarcastic approach to how much people IGNORE my birthday. i put it under fiction simply to underline that. but yea...thanks for the comment.
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I liked it a lot, really well written
Cool story about your birthday Keep writing, this is wonderful
All the best,
Pozo
I forgot to say, I got this from Shameless
Edited on Nov 15, 12:55 because ''. -
....Chelsea.. I love you....
this was a good write but it makes me sad....
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