A dreadful silence
long enough to count as eternity
what I've been waiting for
Just a glimpse of your face
will be enough to light my day1
I wonder when
I wonder how
looking at the far sunset horizon
and the eternal glowing skies
which seems to be an endless journey2
The endless torments in my heart
a growing desire just to hold your hand
my heartbeats are intertwining within me
agitated, fooled, anxiety that soars like eagles
racing through the tracks of pulses within me3
Every second that went history
is another torment in my heart
but because you shine in those unyielding thoughts
I didn’t overlook any light, no matter how small
for the sake of getting even a little closer to you
you're all that mattered to me
because all I ever wanted is you4
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Hmm! this just hit me when I came back from University Definately thinking of someone while doing this for someone who is dear to my heart I miss ya^_^
Please give me honest opinion and thoughts about this!
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A very romantic poem, lol, ^_^ I couldn't find a 'tune' but that's cause I got music blaring in my ears, lol.
It's very interesting and sweet, well done.
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Awww, that's so sweet caira.
makes my heart soar like i'm on the wings of an eagle.
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AWWWWWW!!!!!
Oh my gosh! It was sooooo sweet. It makes me jelous of the girly ou were thinking about, lol! No seriously, though, that was beautiful and I love how you described each and everyfeeling! It was great! Three cheers!
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awww noky!!!! this was beautiful you almost have me tearing up. basically because i've been in a lovey dovey mood all day but thats a different story. great work noky wolf!! love ya. - miss nikkilicious
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OOOh, i liked it a lot Noky!!!
Who were you thinking about hmmm?
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