Yesterday. The day before today. A day has gone past since I had last seen you. A day ago I felt your arms around me, feeling your body next to me. You had held me so close, like nothing could go wrong. I still see the stars that we had stared at for so long. So long. So long that we slept in each others warm arms. 1
It all seemed so amazing. I had told you everything. All my secrets, my dreams, my life. I told you everything and thought you had done the same. But I was only proven wrong. You knew everything while I... I knew nothing. Nothing about the one who I had believed in. In the one person I believe was all mine till the end. My one and only, forever.2
But I say So long to you now. I hope you will do the same. Good bye my love. Say good bye to the girl you once knew. She is gone, and out comes a new one. Broken and ashamed. Hating and blaming, everything is your fault. It hurts me inside, I am torn to pieces, unable to stand straight. I am alone. Alone.3
I don't cry anymore, not anymore. I can't breath or sleep anymore, not like I used to, not anymore. I stand alone, hating still. But I will be okay, really I will. It takes time you see, it will be all better soon enough. You were my one and only, and now you are neither. 4
Go now, say good bye. It is the end for you and me. I won't cry no more. I will stand tall once more and be strong like I used to. I will be strong, just you see.
Author notes
Behind These Hazel Eyes by Kelly Clarkson
Broken up, deep inside
But you won't get to see the tears I cry
I like these two lines cause I can really relate to them personally.
A contest entry
- Do You Hear the Melody? by Frozen Angel.
225 points, ended February 21, 2008, 4 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next story in this contest, remove from contest - Mini Short Stories by abba12.
700 points, ended March 6, 2008, 36 entries
Honorable mention
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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this is great and i love the song its based off. i love repetition and this piece feels almost lyrical. great message, great writing.
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I like this story, it shows a lot of emotion and the word choice is very poetic. Nice job. Good luck in my contest as well as the other one.

*Frozen Angel*

