My Place chapter 11

I woke up in the middle of the night. My head was pounding and the room was spinning. I felt very sick. I was confused about how I ended up in the room. I looked at my clothes to find they were the same I wore today. I tried to remember what happened. All I could remember was having dinner and Tyler getting a drink for us.1

I bolt straight up. I passed out because of the alcohol. I got sort-of drunk last night. Tyler was going to pay for that. All though I had to admit that the drink was rather good. I wonder if Tyler did it on purpose. I feel asleep trying to answer that question.2

That night I dreamed of this world. Everything was perfect here. Then the dreamed changed to my home. Everyone was wondering where I was. They were worried about me. My mom was crying and my dad comforting. I felt a pang of guilt for running away. Then the dream ended and I saw a bright light. Then a face appeared in the glow and the next thing I knew there was an angel before me.3

“Catherine, you must go back to your family,” The angel said.4

“Who are you? And why should I go back?” I asked in my sleep.5

“I’m your guardian angel. I tell you what is right when you are not sure. You must go back and tell them why you ran away. They are very worried about you Catherine,” the angel answered.6

“But I want to stay here with Tyler. He loves me more than my family ever did,” I complained.7

“Your family loves you to even though you don’t know it. Catherine, they love you and I’m sure they will let you return,” She reassured me.8

“If you insist I will return I will,” I told here reluctantly.9

“Now wake up and tell Tyler. Told him I visited you and he will understand,” The angel said before she left.10

I woke up with sun streaming in the window. I got up and changed my clothes. I felt light headed when I stood up. I splashed water on my face which made it feel a little better. Just then Tyler knocked on the door. I went over and opened it. Tyler looked very tired.11

“Tyler are you ok?” I asked with a little to much concern.12

“I was up most of the night concerned about you,” he mumbled to exhausted to talk.13

“Well I’m fine. Oh why don’t you come in and sit down? I have something to tell you,” I told him opening the door wider.14

He came in and sat on the chair facing the window that over looked the lake. He watched the swans swim and play. I came over and sat next to him. I watched the clouds drift through the sky like cotton candy. I tried to find the easiest way to tell him. It was just too hard to tell him I would be leaving. Inside I knew this would hurt, but I couldn’t let that bother me. Tyler would have to understand. I couldn’t bare the thought of leaving Tyler, maybe forever. Then I toke a deep breath and started. 15

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  • MysticalRayne
    January 23, 2008
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    I really like this - kept me reading right up until the end - nice job


  • Surreal Rhapsody
    January 22, 2008

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    how emotionful. I likd this chapter. the ending of it is so sad, though. I cant wait till the next chapter.