something something!

i went to sleep in my clothes last night
when i do it reminds me of you
i went to sleep in my clothes last night
but i didn't wear them the whole night through!

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this is entirely not done. i just had to write it down somewhere so i didnt forget it!

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  • Midnightmare
    January 21, 2008
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    hahaha this was so good.
    Short and sweet (so far!) yet very interesting.
    How long did it take you to think this up? it's really good.
    I'm interested to see what the rest of the poem is like!
    Please let me know when you are finished it so I can read it.
    Well done!


    • lexiconsthedevil
      January 21, 2008
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      thanks! i'll let you know when i do. but yeah about how long it took me to think this up. things like this just come to me so it took about all of 2 seconds