Phoenix Flames and Burned Out Ashes

Life will burn with flame,1

Death will end in shame.2

Someone rises from the ashes,3

Others die in random crashes.4

A circle has no beginning,5

No end to keep the blood from thinning.6

The start has an end to reach toward,7

But ending it is always hard.8

People say they know what death is,9

Only the beginning of deranged madness.10

I say the purpose of that is a lie,11

The purpose of life is to die.12

As we die, we're born again,13

To live through happiness and pain.

Author notes

I was half asleep when I wrote this and I know it isn't very good, so yeah...

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  • ice wolf Greeters member
    February 15, 2008

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    Really really good poem. Keep penning brother. You're pretty good at this.


  • Xscene-massacreX
    February 1, 2008
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    This is really cool. I like the rhymeness of it. Good Write and keep it up.^^


  • Houjin Xayd
    January 18, 2008

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    Um it cool, stuff like that always sounds call but where the message in there they should have been one