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Once there was a baby bear and a mommy bear
Mommy bear was very lonely, so she ate a lot of honey
But it couldn't make her happy
It made her angry, she yelled at baby bear, and pulled his fur
Baby bear wanted her to be happy with daddy bear again
So he put special things in her honey
How do you like the honey mommy bear?
Mommy bear likes it X_X
(Moral: everlasting happiness is everlasting breathlessness)1
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Once there were three brothers
The oldest one was smart
The middle one was strong
The youngest one was kind, even though his brothers were mean
They pulled apart small things
He would put them back together, but it did not make them breathe
The mean ones hated their brother, because everyone loved him
One day at suppertime, they locked him away, no peas for you
They forgot about him, and moved away
Where is your brother wicked children
They ran back, and let him out
They were sorry, they gave him their peas
But he would not could not eat them
It was too late
(Moral: the good find hell in life, the wicked find it in death)2
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Once a spider came to a fly
Come with me and we will drink tea
He buzzed his wings and wondered why3
He flew to the web4
Had tea and coffee and scone
He walked to the door, said I can't have more
I really must go home5
Are you sure yo've had enough?6
Spider slyly asks fly
He said i've got food right now
She smiled said so do I7
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Sad John had a daughter and son
He loved them both very much
Josh and Jenny
One day Josh was sick, Jenny was not sick
One day Josh was dead, Jenny was not dead
Sad John had tea with Josh
Gave the scraps to Jenny
Why are you still alive?
Josh is gone, are you better than my son?
Useless Jenny I wish she would leave too
But she had already gone
Sad John was all alone
He took something silver, in his hand
Soon I'll be with you
Put something silver between his ears
But he's still alone
Because he did not go where they are
They cry sometimes
Because daddy is Alone8
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We're going to say goodbye
To a bad little girl
She was not mean or ugly
We hate her anyway
Because she was not one of us
So we put her in the trunk
And we lived happily ever after9
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The witch gives you candy
The witch gives you shoes
The witch gives you radishes
The witch gets the noose10
The witch punishes children
Who do not do their chores
Children who don't clean up
Children it's time to play11
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Susie likes teasing the kittens
The kittens don't like it
Susie's mom said: Susie, stop teasing the kittens
Susie's mom said: Susie, they don't like it
But Susie didn't listen
Now the cats are big and strong
Susie's mother warned her
They play with her ball of yarn12
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There is an old man
He has candy at his house
He gives you his candy
Just come inside his house
All alone in the dark
In the basement
In a cage
Candy is made of LIES13
Author notes
Disclaimer to my disclaimer. if you've read this far you're probably thinking, "gee, these weren't that creepy." If you are thinking this, my disclaimer was not directed at you as these are not that scary at all, i was simply scaring away the faint of heart.
these will all be multiple pages with sketchy illustrations
important illustrations
1. closing illustrationmommy bear sprawled out with X eyes and a jar of honey with a skull on it
4. closing illustration is a hand next to a gun in a pool of blood
5. closing illustration is a trunk either in a river or in the ground
6. closing illustration blood trail and broomstick
7. closing illustration a ball of yarn that looks like a head
8. closing illustration old man holding candy
The cake is a lie?
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thanks, i had just gotten done playing a psych thriller and it gave me a few ideas
none of them really came out quite how i wanted, but i'm still happy with them -
It was written pretty well with just the right mixture of creepyness, I would not say i was scared for my life but It was a unique and interesting concept ^_^
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they sort of give you goosepumps,atleast better than another typical vampire movie or that stupid thr ring
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The illustrations will add to the tales, but also take away from it. I was able to pull deliciously wicked images from my own mind as I read.
The tales are very impressively written. Susie and the cats made me smile at the very thought of killer housecats. Well done.
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This is pretty good. I've never thought of some of these things like this before. Way to put a unique spin on it. Great job. I hope that in the future, I can read some more of your work.
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good, but not creepy. it kind of made me think of retelling of fairy tales
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hehehe i thought it was kind of depressive
but to my own surprise i really liked it.
creepy, yes they are creepy.
i liked everyone of them but the one john had to die. -
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i know but i had to keep in mind that some people might get wierded out by them. thanks for reading -
Very creepy...... I liked these a lot. They reminded me of a poem about the tooth fairy I wrote ages ago.
I bet these will look great with the illustrations up.
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thanks for reading
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