A Word Between Friends

There have been times when tears of heaven fell
I've been there
I've shed my own tears
I once hid in the dark
So no one could see my pain
I've regretted that1

There have been times when God shouted like roaring thunder
I've been there
I've argued with my own demons
I once ignited my own flames of anger
So no one could see my fears
I've regretted that2

There have been times when the world was a stage
I've been there
I've been a part of the dreadful masquerade
So strangers would turn a blind eye
I've regretted that3

When the spotlight shines on you
Don't run away
You shouldn't be the spitting image
Of a girl who is ashamed of looking in the mirror
Trust me, I've been there4

So take off the mask
And look out to the crowd
You never know
They just might applaud5

And when the rain threatens to pour
And the thunder threatens to yell
Flash a smile
Keep that sparkle in your eye
For the ones who love the sun
Have never danced in the rain

Author notes

This was a school assignment where I had to give advice to a friend of mine by writing a poem.

Enjoy!

*Frozen Angel*

A contest entry

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  • Vampire MnMs
    June 20, 2008

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    Wow.

    This is another one I'm looking for, but I still have ONE more to read. So you be ready to find out


  • xoxKokaygirlxox
    March 16, 2008
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    VEry good thanks for entering

  • werner1221
    March 5, 2008

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    nice ending. the start was slow, but i loved the ending. i almost stopped reading and im very glad i didnt. lol.

    favorite lines:
    For the ones who love the sun
    Have never danced in the rain
    (WHAT AN AWESOME LINE. WOW)

    deff thx for entering


  • Xtclozer-
    March 1, 2008
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    This was Beautiful. I loved it so much, and you sent out a great message. Do not hide yourself behind a mask, but show the world who you truely are, and people will accept you for who you are.

    Great job, truely beautiful.

    Thanks for etnering my contest, and good luck.


  • Melissa Loves Jeffy
    January 31, 2008

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    This was so extremely beautiful and so well written. No lie i absolualy love this poem. Especially the ending. Great write. Thanks for entering and good luck in the contest


  • Paragonz Shadow
    January 16, 2008

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    Wow, it's great. I really love how you finish it: for the ones who love the sun have never danced in the rain. Beautifully poetic! I think it deserves a good mark!

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