Change of Heart Part I

I didn't understand your intentions, when you said goodbye. I didn't know that you were trying to save me. Sometimes, to save also means to hurt. So you said goodbye and walked away. Before I knew it I was saving someone's life. And quickly enough I fell in love; his name was Kiley. Right after I hooked up with him...you hooked up with sae, my worst enemy. Things went OK...but every time I saw you, I couldn't help thinking about the past. All the times we shared, all the memories we had, they were all history. Although me and Kiley had a good relationship, there was some doubt in it. He loved me, but he also loved someone else...1

To be continued...2

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This story is based on a Manga series

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  • Co-Co-Cola
    December 15, 2004
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    It is!! It is that story! Oh, I love what you're doing!! I wish I had enough guts to do that! This is one of the most romantic stories ever and I love what you're doing to it!


  • cuteness
    November 7, 2004
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    BETTER!!!! i like this version better!!! GREAT JOB Baby!!! i loved it.... rock on! u have the gr8est writes... love ya girl... if u can go on aim!!
    love, linz


  • cuteness
    November 5, 2004
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    wow... love it!!! is that true??? cos for my life it is!! gr8 job baby!!
    love, linz