Smashed Dreams

There he was. . .wow, he was great. So great I had no idea what to say to him. It was teen center night, and there he was, Mike Maxo, standing on the dance floor, just staring at what i thought was me, or someone behind me. 1

Don't get me wrong, Mike is NOT a perfect guy. Sure, he plays the guitar, and he's in the school Jazz Band. He is actually on the heavy side, and his face is a little too round, you know what I mean? He is actually a cool figure in our school RCMS, River City Middle School. I knew he was a cool person, and I wasn't, but I had never realized it that much, there had always been a hope. and now it's gone. 2

There he was chatting with none other than Kate Winslom, one of the schools prettier girls. when i saw that i realized that he would only be who he's SUPPOSED to be, and never branch out for a girl like me. I was on the dance floor but when Fergalicious was blasting through the speakers, i wasn't exactly FEELING IN THE MOOD. you know, i actually used to think that i could have been friends with this guy, and maybe we could have just been great friends. I didn't have to be his girlfriend. . .i was ok with that. But now, i know that he would actually choose Kate over me, and that will bring me down.

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Don't think you gus will ever get this. Mike, actually stands for a lot of guys. . . .i am so confused. help me .

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  • EmilyNicole
    January 31, 2008

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    I agree with the slang thing but I like this
    I know how it feels too, TO have that hope puled away but sometimes you just have to get things off your chest. We all die someday, you can't worry too much about things


  • stardust3492
    January 19, 2008

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    Good story. Just you say "you know" and overused slang a lot, so you might want to take that stuff out. Other that that, good job.


  • StarIlluminated
    January 13, 2008
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    Is that why you went home early from TC? anyway, good story. RCMS...lol . Soo I'll message you...


  • DeadlyTurnip
    January 13, 2008

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    Aww...*huggles Katie* Yea, well, I know what you mean through this...Do you even know the guy/s at all? Cuz if you don't I would reccommend getting to know them first.

    • DeadlyTurnip
      January 13, 2008
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      GAH I THOUGHT YOU WERE KATIE!!! *slaps herself multiple times* I'm so sorrrryyy!!!!

      Ok, revised comment:

      Aww...*huggles ->>Kathryn<<-* Yea, well, I know what you mean through this...You sit near one of them in your class, right? Uste that to your advantage <. And for some of the others...just get to know them a little better. Then you can, first of all, make your choice. Lol


  • LadyLionnir
    January 12, 2008

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    What do you need help with? This was a very realistic piece, and I often feel the same way: the guy I like is always out of reach.

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