I woke up to the beauty of the predawn haze making its way through the window, her face buried between my thighs. I could feel the sweet sensations caused by the tip of her tongue teasingly circling my clit. My breath caught and a tremor raced wickedly up my spine and my hips arched closer to her. She moved away from my clit then her hands gripping my waist holding me in place as she placed sweet kisses along my thighs. The closer the kisses got to my lips the more they turned into stinging nips. Until she was pulling one in between her teeth. Sucking gently then forcefully until I wasn't sure whether to moan from pleasure or move away in pain.1
This was the desired reaction as she switched to offer the same service to the other providing more teasing and more force. More pleasure? She moved on kissing me inside. Sliding her tongue sweetly around. Testing me I think. Testing my wetness and my readiness. She kissed my clit. Then bit it sending a sensation keen to heaven racing through every cell of my body. She glanced up at me a wicked knowing smile shaping her face as her dark brown almost black eyes locked with mine.2
Our eyes stayed locked that way until I felt one then two of her fingers slide easily into the puddle that I had become. She was gentle at first. Moving slowly and easily as she gazed up at me. My hips moved with her rocking to meet her thrusts. There was a slow burning fire beginning to build up inside of me. It was sweet and intense and so right. 3
I moaned. I heard her groan. Then two fingers became three and slow became fast. Soft became hard and wet became soaked. And it was so perfect. Her fingers pounded into me causing my body to arch of its own free will. Not one for penetration of any kind, the pain was more than a bit overwhelming but it was out weighed by the ripple affect pleasure it was causing. Her thumb brushed against my clit applying immense pressure every time her glorious fingers, and their bruising accuracy, glided into me.4
I wanted to cum. Needed to experience that pent up release I had been keeping from both of us for what seemed like forever. Pleasure-Pain or not penetration has never been able to move me to orgasm and I think she sensed it. Her tongue began to tease my clit with brief flicks as her fingers slowed their drumbeat inside of me. Her lips surrounded the tip and tugged. I moaned and squirmed. Her tongue slid down my slit then inside. 5
I surrounded her as she drank me in, her tongue picking up the beat her fingers had abandoned as one hand held me up and open for her and the fingers of the other hand massaged and teased my clit bringing me to the point of explosion.6
Instinct forced me to try and hold back. To try and fight the pleasure she was causing but I couldn't and I let go. Everything exploded and ran from me in a release that provoked my bones to numbness even as my heart threatened to thump itself right out of my chest.7
I tried to open my eyes, which I had closed tight with pleasure, and I couldn't. I tried to catch my breath and it seemed to allude me. Aftershocks ripped and ran through my body causing tingling and an ultra sensitivity I had never before experienced.8
She wasn't through yet. Her lips surrounded my clit pulling it into her mouth where her tongue went to play. Lapping at it sucking on it applying the pressure that always sends me spiraling into oblivion. I wanted to arch towards her but she had just turned me to mush. Not so much mush that when she pushed me to the edge I couldn't fall over calling her name, my hands in her hair holding her to me. I don't know if it was to make sure she didn't leave me or to keep me grounded. 9
Afterwards she kissed the insides of my thighs before sliding up to lie beside me. I gazed into her eyes before closing mine. There was the sweet sensation of her soft juice covered lips against mine as I inched closer to her - then I was asleep.10
Round 2 11
I knew the exact moment that she woke up. I saw her back arch from the sensation of the hot candle wax sliding down the middle of her back. Her head came up quickly as she realized her hands were tied to the headboard.12
"Umm…" was all she got out before I began peeling the cooling wax from her skin. A moan escaped as my tongue trailed the path left by the strawberry flavored wax down her back across her firm cheeks and down the backs of her legs. I made a return trip back up her body this time biting as I went instead of licking. Nips were followed by soft kisses to take some of the sting away. I felt the tremors race through her body every time I touched her bit her, healed her. When I was lying over her, our bodies completely in line I whispered my instructions in her ear in a clear and even tone so that she would know I was to be taken seriously. 13
"No moving unless I tell you to. If you want more you will ask me. When you reach that point where you don't think you can take anymore -- you will. You will not cum until I say you can and if you try to before I tell you to I will stop. I will leave. My hands --" I teasingly smacked her ass with my palm, "-- my fingers, " I slid two inside of her wetness briefly then back out,"--my tongue," I traced it across the back of her neck, where I knew she was most sensitive, "--all of me and all of my pleasure - gone."14
She moaned and her body arched under mine. I laughed. "I said no moving," I brought my hand up and tangled it in her hair pulling her head back towards me. "No moving!" I pulled her earlobe between my teeth biting it then sucking on it gently as my hips moved against her pressing her deeper into the bed as a knee slid between her thighs applying pressure to her center.15
She was soaked. Within seconds my knee was covered with her. Keeping the pressure applied I moved from her ear to her neck placing soft kisses there to heighten her senses so that she would be on edge as my tongue danced along her spine until I stopped at the base. I could feel her heart beat. The tremors racing through her body were like my own as she fought the instinct to move with me as my knee still moved against her center. Like the ones caused by her just hours before.16
I bit the skin at the base of her spine. The urge was overwhelming and I couldn't pin point where it came from exactly but the result was a gush of wetness across my knee and my name silently whispered across her lips.17
That time the tremor felt was my own as it raced through my body so quickly I had to sit up. She turned to look at me wondering where the pressure of my body had gone. It was instinct. My instructions to her earlier of no movement immediately forgotten. My hand stroked across her ass causing a harsh sound that made me pause, wondering if I had really hurt her.18
She moaned and I stared fascinated by the brutal redness of her and of my hand. I had wanted to do that for so long and as I leaned over to kiss away the sting I marveled at the beauty of its affect. She'd stopped moving.19
I kissed down to the backs of her thighs to the insides. Her scent engulfed me she was wet and the desire to taste her overwhelmed me to the point of near insanity. I pulled her legs causing her hand restraints to tighten. There was a deep intake of breath as I bent her knees so that her ass was up and she was blessedly open to me. I could see all of her.20
She was so pink and juicy and while the sight was odd and gloriously new to me it was familiar as well. Cravings to claim her and mark her stole over me at the same moment my tongue slid inside bringing my face completely into her as I held onto her ass squeezing periodically as I moved inside. I pulled her back towards me on my tongue as I tried to go deeper as my tongue stroked faster sliding in and out teasing the sides of her pillow soft walls.21
One of my fingers stole around to tease her clit playing with it making it jump with joy as I buried my face, and thus my tongue deeper inside of her. I loved the feel and taste of her, though it was definitely an acquired one. She, however, wasn't squirming the way I wanted her to. So I pulled back, getting turned on every second as I stared at her ass in the air open for me, waiting for me, needing me. 22
I thought about how deep she was. How she had practically swallowed my all too willing tongue. I wondered…23
One finger slid in stroking her inside. 24
Then there were two. Stroking and massaging her stirring her up. Causing a more drenching wetness and inspiring a room full of moans.25
Lastly there were three. Not as easy but once inside finding a strong beat like a pulse as they rocked deeper inside of her. My other hand gripped her waist as she twisted her hips back and forth on my fingers burying her head in the pillow when she drove back to meet them once and they weren't there. Then they were, completely, all of them as deep as they were allowed to go. 26
I kept them there, loving how she clenched and unclenched me from the inside. Her shivers raced from her body through my fingers and to my core. I massaged her clit as I moved up so that I was over her. My hand stole below to pull gently then tug a little harsher on her nipples as the three buried fingers began to move inside. I was going insane. She felt so good. And I wanted her to cum.27
"You're going to cum for me?" I asked softly. I wasn't sure if she heard me over her moans and my deep breathing, but I slid my hand out and pumped it back in quickly just in time to feel her clench me tightly inside as she arched back and moaned into the pillow. I felt my fingers become coated. I felt the tremors as they spiraled and raced through her body. Then they were racing through mine as a river slid down my leg.28
I lay there, my head resting on her back. Exhausted. She had dropped from her knees to lie flat on her stomach. I listened to her deep breathing and was inspired all over again. I reached up and untied her hands. I told her to turn over.29
When she did I kissed her. My tongue parted her lips instantly. I wanted her to taste herself from my lips and I wanted the pressure of my lips to never be forgotten by hers. I moved from her lips, nipping at her chin and down across her throat to the space between her wonderful breasts. I trailed my tongue across each nipple in turn watching them harden against my tongue. I pulled one between my teeth not biting, but not exactly sucking either. My reward was a soft moan and her body raising up sweetly to meet mine. 30
I moved downward. My tongue stopping to tease and taunt her via a swirl trip inside of her belly button. Then I was there. I would say I was in Heaven but that would be overly dramatic and hardly accurate. I was at the core of pleasure itself. An oasis of pleasure if you will. Though my thoughts at the time focused merely on the dripping wetness of the beautiful woman before me. 31
I lay flat on my stomach before her. Opening her legs wide and placing one on either of my shoulders. Again she was open before me. 32
My tongue stole out all of it's own accord and swiped across her clit. My breath cool against her warm wetness made her tremble. I sucked her clit gently, periodically tugging on it letting the tip of my tongue dance around it. I slid down her wet trail to the entrance to the gates of her "heaven" and slid my tongue inside. She was so hot and wet and her body instantly arched closer to me. I felt like a God as I slid back and forth from deep inside of her to teasing her clit. I was working her into a neat little frenzy that was driving me crazy right a long with her. I felt her thighs clench around the side of my head. I could feel her moans and sighs of pleasure more than I could hear them. And her taste surrounded me. I was absorbed by it and the more I tasted her the more I wanted.33
Through a haze of desire and need and an almost aching pleasure I heard her begging me to let her come. I felt her soft soaked petal like walls clenching my tongue where it worked inside of her as my fingers massaged her clit. Her hands were in my hair pulling me closer to her even as she rode my tongue so hard that she began to slowly scoot away. The pressure on the back of my head and the building pressure and heat between her thighs made me increase the speed of my movements. In seconds her whole body tensed and seizured as a waterfall sprung forth from her thighs nearly drowning me as I tried to drink her all in.34
Her thighs eased their grip on the side of my head and her fingers only play absentmindedly in my hair. I lay there still completely caught by her scent and her taste and the sticky feel of her skin where her thighs were coated by that which I could not capture. Minor aftershocks shook her body every couple of seconds for a little while. When I thought she had completely calmed down, her breathing having gone back to normal, I whispered her name. She looked down at me, a smile curving her lips, her eyes locked with mine. I smiled too and in one swift movement my tongue slid across her still hard clit. My teeth grazing it as I pulled it into my mouth. Her breath caught as two fingers slid under her and inside. She tried to inch away whispering that she couldn’t take anymore but my mouth and my hands followed her. Three fingers were now inside of her, the fingers of my other hand pulling her nipples, her clit being massaged by my lips.35
“OH-MY-GOD!”36
She exploded. Her release rushed out of her covering my hand and soaking the sheets beneath. Her breathing was fast and the after shocks lasted longer. As the last ebbed and flowed away I removed my fingers, licking every one dry as I moved from between her legs to lie beside her. A smile curved her beautiful lips as I lay beside her. 37
She looked peaceful and content and oh so beautiful. It seemed only fair to give her a few hours rest before we started on Round 3. 38
Author notes
(this was a prewrite but AP was screwing up the format when I changed it from a story to a poem so that I could enter it in the contest so I deleted and reposted it.)
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Comments
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Lol. That was hot. Umm I would definitely suggest putting that in an erotic catergory as well, so kiddies don't read things they aren't supposed to read. lol. That was great. Keep writing stuff like this! -
Wow that makes me really want to invite my girlfriend over..
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wow! that was amazing..i love your work. great details as well. its always good to have them
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nice.
I haven't read anything this attuned to detail in a while and I didn't realize how much I was missing it.
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Yeah...I'm gonna copy what Tiffany said. WOW.
Awesome job.
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is now very horny
Holy...wow...that was...yeah, that was awesome.
You had the rhyming beat thing in the beginning, maybe you did throughout and I just stopped paying attention to that
Anyway, great work. My pleasure to read. Good luck in the contest.
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