Some days, she's different. 1
Some days, she's not.2
She just doesn't know what to think of herself. She doesn't know whether to love herself or push away. Her family seems to love her, but how is that possible? Nobody loves me, she thought. 3
Sometimes she's just horrible. Sometimes she's the kind of person who likes to watch people cry. And sometimes, she thinks, she is a great person who hates to see people cry. She just doesnt get the fact that she's human. 4
She's usually the funny type of person who helps the kids that are made fun of. For example, Karwn holds the door for her, so she says thank you. And she says good morning to Karen every single morning that karen's at school. Maybe she just feels bad for them, or maybe it's because she knows it's the right thing to do. 5
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just explain who the she is early on
or add more background to "she" at least so we aren't confused. try writing this like it is a poem, and it'll great. of course, it'll be great however you decide to do it! can't wait to reaD THE FINISHED PROJECT! -
Nicee so far Kera
I liked it so far. I hopes you can finish it sooon.
Greatt sooo far. Hehe.
beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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hey kera how are ya nice story LAA YAY
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