story shorts! 0.0.1


"...let me out...." the voice whispered slowly.1

Spinning quickly she screamed, "GO AWAY!"2

"Let me out..." the voice repeated.3


-Insomnia; a state of inability to sleep. It can be brought on by many factors, or one factor alone.-4


"why won't it stop?" the girl sobbed as she clutched her head in her hands, swaying slightly.5

"Why won't what stop Dia?" the doctor asked sighing.6

"The voice..." she whispered, haunted eyes darting to the corners of the room. "The voice never stops."7

"But there is no voice Dia."8

She stopped suddenly, staring at the doctor sitting in front of her. "It can hear you." she growled out before resuming her frantic search.9

The doctor sighed once again, putting the empty mug in her hand on the table behind her. "Dia, these voices are not real." she paused. "have you been taking the medication i prescribed you?"10

Dia stood up suddenly walking to the door on the other side of the room. "the blue one's in the morning, the red ones in the evening, the yellow ones are given to me by the nurse if she thinks i need them."11

"And you're still not sleeping?"12

"The voice doesn't let me sleep..." she whispered before a little timer next to the doctor rang. "see you in a few days doc." Dia whispered before exiting the room.13

"I just don't know what to do with that girl." The Doctor murmured standing up from her chair and reaching for her coffee mug.
Looking on the empty desk, the doctor frowned in confusion.14

"Maybe it fell." she murmered looking on the floor around her. sighing she stood up and began to walk to the door. "I'll just get a different mug for now." She left the room, locking the door behind her, a coffee mug sitting upside down, unnoticed, on the chair she had just left.

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  • Leech
    January 15, 2008

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    hehe, thats really gnarly, i like it, great flow, some grammar mistakes, but who cares? overall, i liked it a lot.
    may your bizkits be limp and your korn be bizkits
    good luck in everything you do!


  • silent dances
    January 12, 2008

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    That was really great! But I wish it was longer, even if It was a short. Please make it lnger! I want to read more!


  • mydarlinghamburger
    January 12, 2008

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    You *points* Keep writing now!!!

    This was really good... and I hope that this isn't another one of those annoying little 'oh it was a one shot' things you do...

    Continue it!!!! I demand it of you.

    all in all great work, even if it did feel a little like we were thrown into the middle of a story, with no background or ending...

    Great work

    Much Love Lila xoxo


    • Hitsuzen
      January 14, 2008
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      ....its a short short.... aka a one shot..... *runs for dear life*