engaged and underage pt 2: Like red on a rose

"No disrespect Mrs. Kennedy, but I love your daughter and I intend to marry her. One way or another." Brett replied. 1

"You're disrespecting me right now Mr. Johnson. I believe you have overstayed your welcome here." Mrs. Kennedy responded. 2

Brett took a huge gulp, said his goodbyes to his lovely fiancee` and her sister and graciously walked out of the condo. 3

"Mom! How can you do this.. I'm twenty years old. I live on my own, I've already established my own company, I believe I am more than ready to become a wife." Leila declared. 4

Mrs. Kennedy didn't say anything as her youngest daughter slammed the apartment door in her mother's face. 5

Brett walked around the corner and down the hall to the elevator, when Leila caught up with him. 6

"Brett!" She exclaimed. He turned around and caught her in his arms as she was trying to stop. She quickly pecked him on the lips. 7

"Baby, what are you doing?" He asked. 8

"Right now, catching my breath." She huffed. 9

"And..." He said trying to get more out of his girlfriend. 10

"I'm coming with you...I can't stay in that apartment right now." She answered. Brett wrapped his masculine arms around his girlfriend's tiny waist and lifted her off the ground in a refreshing hug. A trip down the elevator, a tour of the building and a journey down Atlantic Coast Highway, Brett and Leila arrived at his own condo. 11

A drafty, ocean breeze sent chills up Leila's spine. 12

"Brr." 13

Brett set his velour jacket over Leila's shoulders and walked behind her as she hauled his huge duffle bag inside. 14

"Oh come on woman, you can do it! I carried seventy-five pound bag all over Iraq for ten months. There's no reason why you should be struggling." Brett teased. 15

"Oh shut up, Mr. Marine. I didn't train intensively for six months at Camp Trojan." she snapped back playfully. Brett opened up the house, uncovered the furniture, and started a fire in the hearth. 16

"Oooo... Somebody is being romantic. Especially after being snooty out there." Leila taunted. He smirked a dirty smile at her. He walked towards her and embraced her into another hug. She lovingly looked up into his eyes and captured the same affectionate gaze he was giving her. 17

"Want something to eat?" He whispered into her ear. 18

"Are you the main entree` or the dessert." She giggled. 19

"Do you always have to be so sexual?" He asked. 20

"No, I just choose to be that way." She grinned and walked into the kitchen. He followed her and they began preparing a late dinner. 21

*****22

Brett set the plate of angel hair pasta with pesto sauce down in front of Leila. 23

"Mmm... This looks good." Leila complimented. 24

"Thank you." He replied. 25

"So what's the deal with your mother?" 26

"She just never saw eye-to-eye with me and your effect on me." Leila replied. 27

"Well what effect does she see?" He asked. 28

"She sees that you pulled me away from my studies, and did some sort of damage to my work ethic... I really don't know what she means by that. The way I see it, you improved what I already was. You taught me basics Mr. Wolf could never master..." She began 29

"We all know Mr. Wolf couldn't obtain those skills with you as his class guinea pig. Do you even remember how much he perspired when you volunteered." Brett chuckled. 30

"Not my fault, I loved to be the first to learn something new." Leila giggled. 31

"And be center of attention." Brett interjected. 32

"Hey!" She exclaimed and flinged a biscuit at his head. 33

"And for your information, yes I do remember. Remember I had to hold his nasty gnarled fingers." 34

"Yes I do remember, you bathed your hands in strawberry daiquiri lotion everyday after class." Brett reminisced. 35

"Hehe... But you liked that lotion." She gleamed. She got up from her seat, sauntered over to Brett. He swiveled around his chair as her arms draped around his shoulders as he cradled her in his lap. 36

She pressed her forehead gently against his and eskimo kissed him. He took it one step further and gave her that midsummer's dream kiss, every girl fantasizes about. Her shoulders heaved forwards as she sighed heavily. She moved her head to the side and he continued to caress her neck with his full lips. 37

She scooted toward him thrusting her pelvic bone into his. Oh how he loved the full view he had of her. One hand was up her shirt and fondling around with the bra clasp. The other hand was lying on her sleek thigh inching its way up, underneath her skirt. 38

After unhooking her bra, she pulled the cups out and threw it to the floor. Their lips released one another as Leila pulled her beautiful Indian red hair into a messy bun. She heavily sighed in pleasure as she felt two of his broad fingers enter her. 39

"OH!" 40

She dove right back into a tongue-tango session. He had reached his destination with his fingers. Thrusting and plowing them into her paradise. His thumb rubbed her clitoris hard, sending her into a stimulating, first orgasm. 41

"You enjoy that baby?" He whispered in husky tone. 42

"Every minute of it, love." She replied. She scooted backwards, and started undoing his zipper. 43

"Babe, you know I can't disrespect this uniform by you doing a sexual act to me while I'm wearing it." He informed. 44

"Well take it off. You're mine tonight, America will have to take to the backseat." She whispered in his ear. She slid his black pants off, and already is "manhood" was standing center and forward. She bit down on his lip for one last kiss, and he immediately grew one inch longer and thicker. She kneeled in between his legs, pulled her breasts over the neckline of her top and started licking the very tip of his "gear." 45

She had him hold two full glasses of water in each hand, as she continued to engulf his "tool" in her mouth. She ringed her tongue around the shaft and slowly went up and down causing an earthquake effect within. Her tongue reached down and delicately tickled his pair. She heard his moans, she knew he was close. She's been wanting and waiting for an eternity to taste his sweet seed. She began to deepthroat him; working better and harder than she ever has. Her hands moved underneath him and started massaging his buttocks. Squeezing them, digging her nails into them and releasing the pressure that was being captivated between him and the dining room chair. 46

"Ahh!" the perfect music Leila has been waiting to hear all night. Streams of semen gushed into her mouth and around her lips. She tilted her head back and guzzled it as if it was a Sex on the Beach shooter. She licked the brim of her lips, making them appear more glossy than before. 47

He pulled her up from her position on her knees, lifted her shirt over her head and slid his hands inbetween her hips and hemline of her skirt, releasing the skirt from her body. She wrapped his arms around her waist and her arms ontop of his shoulders. He kissed her with such romance it put Romeo and Juliet to shame. 48

Brett guided her to the center of the room and down onto the lush Arabian carpet. Her knees propped up against her chest. Her arms steadied her balance as Brett leaned over her knees. He succulently sucked on her full bottom lip. Her knees spread open just enough for him to slip through them. He kissed her inbetween her boobs, down her willowy abdomen. His haven was coming closer; She could feel it, he could feel it. The warmth, the anticipation it began to be too much but once he started caressing her clit, her moans became louder and her knuckles became white just from clinging onto the rug. 49

"Brett....I..Can't wait...much longer." Leila panted. Music to Brett's ears. She parted her legs, and he inserted his "manhood" into her waiting "luxury." He started teasing her with his hardness, knowing it would make her go mad with pleasure. He would lightly put in the head and let the lips clamp around it. Describing her as wet as an ocean didn't do her justice. With just how lubricious she was, he began to blitz away. He really gave her a beating. 50

One arm held up her position as she pulled him by his neck closer to her. Sweat glistened on both bodies. Her boobs looked so precious and sexy, they were like two appetizing apples, and Brett definitely wanted to taste them. She leaned back on the rug, wrapped her legs around his waist and let him deep penetrate her. She started biting her bottom lip trying to subdue her coming orgasm. but when he started screwdriving his penis inside her, it was too much for the both of them. A combined orgasm overtook them like a wildfire. 51

He rolled off of her and laid next to her. Her breathing started to regulate itself, as she curled up next to him in his arms. 52

"So small and delicate, like an orchid." he thought to himself, "My Orchid." 53

The fire was blazing in the fireplace, the candles flickering on the dining room table, and the sound of the waves crashing on the shore made tonight perfect. Brett gently moved her a few inches to the left, and got up from the floor. He grabbed two, huge, feathery pillows and his favorite, Miami Heat blanket. he covered her up, covered himself up, fluffed up his pillow then placed the extra pillow underneath her angelic head. He wrapped his arms around her heavenly body, buried his face in her luscious hair and fell asleep next to her. 54

****** 55

Leila woke up the next morning, relaxed and rejuvenated and unaware that she was naked. She looked to her right and saw a pulchritudinous, sleeping Brett, she eased herself out of the simple-made bed and shuffled towards the bathroom. 56

While brushing her teeth, Brett came up behind her, embraced her in a loving hug, and then twirled her around to face him.57

"Mmmm... Baby, I love what you're wearing." He whispered. 58

"Oh really! It's the latest in Adam and Eve couture." She giggled. He couldn't help it but smile. It was staggering at how much he loved this woman. Her soul, her grace, her charm, her beauty. Everything about her was perfect, even if she did have toothpaste trickling down the side of her mouth. He gave her a quick peck on the lips and licked up the toothpaste residue. 59

"Eww!" She squealed. "That's gross." 60

Oh yeah, he loved her sense of humor. Nobody else could pull off that sweet and innocent laugh and levity like she can. 61

"Leila Michelle Kennedy, will you do me the honor and privilege of being my date to the Marines Ball tonight, 7pm, at the Starlight Country Club?" He asked. 62

"Of course I will be your date, Brett Tanner Johnson." She gleamed. 63

"Perfect." He replied with a French accent. 64

"Haha... You really have to stop doing that." She giggled, after drying her face in a bath towel. "What's this event for anyways?"65

"Its where our fallen soldiers or dismemberment soldiers get their medals. That's the main purpose but they also award other soldiers for their duties." Brett replied. "Now move out of mirrors way." 66

"Oh, and I swear you're so cocky in the morning." She hissed.67

"Well you like your man clean and shaven right?" He asked.68

"Yes." She replied. 69

"So then I have a reason to be cocky." He laughed. Leila rolled her eyes and walked into the bedroom. She slipped into a pair of white jeans, a silky blouse, and one of Brett's old college sweatshirts. She pulled her hair into a pony tail and went back to the den to start cleaning up. She pulled all her belongings together and stuffed them into her handbag. 70

"Babe, I know you're still primping and pramping but I've got to get home for a bit, Madi left an urgent message on my phone. I'll be back before the ball tonight." She called out. She heard the faucet running and to her that was her "okay" answer. She headed out the door, revved up the engine to Brett's Chevrolet Silverado and drove towards her own condo. 71

******72

"Okay I'm here what's the problem." Leila announced as she walked into her apartment. 73

"OH nothing I'm just really excited for my new engaged sister that I wanted to shop with her for her beautiful wedding dress." Madi grinned. 74

"Madi, I'm engaged, I'm not getting married tomorrow. and I have one million things to do today." Leila replied. 75

"Well you can get married tomorrow, just make the voyage to Las Vegas." Madi explained. 76

"Yeah. I don't think so.I'm putting my foot down at eloping." Leila replied as she walked into her closet. She filed through tons of dresses she's accumulated over the past few months. Finally she found the one she was looking for. A short, white dress, with a rhinestone charm in the middle and diamond straps. She picked up her silver, gemmed shoes and placed them on her bed. 77

"You'll put all those other dates to shame at the Marines Ball, my lady." Madi giggled.78

"That's the point." Leila smiled. "Anyways I've got to go. A million things to do today." She picked up her other belongings and left the apartment. 79

*****80

"My my... Don't you look stunning." Brett complimented once the ceremony was over. He grabbed her by the hand and had her twirl around. He took a whiff of her perfume and sighed in euphoria. 81

"Only one word can describe you. Beautiful." He whispered in her ear. 82

"And you look just as prestige as my Ken doll." Leila giggled. 83

Brett fidgeted when he heard the name of that doll. 84

"Never compare me to that no-tool, thong-wearing, metrosexual plastic freak." 85

Leila couldn't help but fall into a fit of laughter. 86

"I only compare you to him cause I know it pisses you off." 87

"Well aren't you humorous." He said sarcastically.88

"But you love me." Leila chuckled. 89

"That is true." Brett smiled. Leila twirled around and spun right into his arms. He loved how perfectly she fit in his arms, against his broad chest. He sighed heavily. She looked at him straight in the eye. His eyes glistened in the moonlight, but Leila felt something. His eyes spoke of something terrible; Did she want to hear it? Probably not. 90

"Brett, whats wrong?" 91

"It's nothing Leila." He replied. 92

"Brett." Leila exclaimed. 93

"Leila, leave it alone. It's nothing for you to worry about." Brett started to raise his voice. Leila started skipping around, playing with a pebble, kicking it around and watching it bounce off the brim of the courtyard fountain. 94

"Are we going to go home or is this rock going to be new companion?" Leila joked. 95

"Leila, I need you to sit down." Brett stated sternly. 96

"Why?" She apprehensively.97

"Because there's something I need to tell you." Brett replied. He walked towards her and that same darkness appeared in his eyes. 98

He wrapped his arms around Leila and held her tight. 99

"Babe what's wrong?" Leila whispered. 100

"In forty-eight hours my troop deploys for another term across the Afghanistan desert." Brett revealed. 101

"You're leaving again?" Leila started to tear up. 102

"Yes." He replied solemnly. 103

"But why you just got back." Leila cried. 104

"I know, but my country needs me." Brett replied softly. He sat on the wall of the fountain and specified that Leila sit next to him. He covered his eyes with his hands and massaged his temples. Leila placed her left hand on his knee, letting him know she was there; mentally, physically, and emotionally. 105

"When did you hear about this?" She asked. 106

"This morning after you left." He responded. 107

"Do you want to get married tonight?" She questioned. He raised his head and looked at her strangely. 108

"I can't marry you, and then just leave you." Brett exclaimed. 109

"Yes, you can. I still have my apartment with my sister, I'll be fine with her. I have my dance studio and my career and my schooling. It'll just be like your first tour, except we won't be boyfriend and girlfriend, we'll be husband and wife." Leila explained. 110

"Leila you don't understand, I want to spend more than just one day and a half as your husband." Brett countered. 111

BANG!!!! 112

A gunshot was fired. The bullet whistled through the midnight sky. 113

"AH!" Brett screamed. He clutched his chest and fell to the ground. The assailant scurried away and hopped into a runaway car. 114

"SOMEBODY HELP!" Leila screamed. Tears fell down her cheeks as she clutched Brett's hand. 115

"Baby please don't leave me. Not yet!" She begged.

Author notes

Okay so i know that the beginning of this story contradicts with the ending of the first part. but it will be fixed soon. and yeah sorry for the poor grammar. grammar and I don't get along lol. but spelling and I do

Also with this series of stories I'm writing I'm including a song that could possibly relate to the story. enjoy the song (if you decide to look it up) and the story

Like red on a rose - Alan Jackson.

pss: I dont know if the song fits, I do know an ex sent me a song before we were dating that dealt with The United States Marine Corps. but I do not remember that song. and of course I can't find it.

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  • FireByrd
    September 30
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    funny cute. Not bad. But didn't really catch me other than the title

  • I am a fan of romance and all that, but your character names reminds me of people that I know. Not you, its me. Imagining them as the character freaked me out and one name is a guy I really adore. the beginning didnt hook me in, a bit boring to me. I read the story, dont worry about that, the sex part was okay. The part when he said he cant disrespect the uniform with sexual act while wearing. I thought that was pretty lame. But the Ken doll part was pretty funny. lol. Overall the story was okay, If i has a romance contest, this would work, but for an erotica contest, this is not close to it. Its sweet, not hot. Thanks for entering


  • Shiki
    January 12, 2008

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    Okay thanks for spending so much efforts and time into this. I really appriciate it. Unfortunately, I tend to be more harsh and strict in contest. So do bear with it but it will help you to improve.

    First of all the whole story flowed very well I love the storyline. You've definately put a lot of efforts into this. Well about the grammars mistake...it doesn't really affect the story when I am reading this so its okay. But one fatal mistake you made Nikki I think you could have Improved it. Its this, "You brought me high, higher up that i could ever reach above the sky and suddenly drop me from the sky, and I fell worst than I ever fell before."

    You've slowly started to get me excited in this but then suddenly you let me down with a sad part. Hmm its like an anti climax actually. I think you know what I'm talking about. I was actually hoping for more after that But the descriptions and everything during the sex was nice Just that sad though you have to bring it down.

    Overall I can feel the hard work and effort you placed into this. Its a good write but I think you can improve it I wish you all the best Should I wait for part2 now??