A woman in her late eighties with milleniums of stuble around her left eyeball. she lived on a spaceship called gamma ray 2. Hermother was calling her down to dinner but she was ignoring her. she had just hacked the telly tubbies website, it was a real challenge for her intellect. "Pikey Milkington. come down this instant your Radiocative Slime Balls are getting hot," Pikeys mother vented pure acid.
A contest entry
- Geek by Nesa Lyrel.
1000 points, ended January 25, 2008, 10 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Uhh...very....random...
This was disjointed and lacked grammatical convention. However, amazingly, you DID have a story, though I wish you'd extended it a little more.
This was a funny little read. If you fix up the grammar and capitalization mistakes, it just might be a random little funny diversion, rather than something so purely...weird (and I mean that in the best of ways!)
Good luck in the contest -
Weldone.... these is now in the top ten of the most random things I've ever read. Weldone >o.O<
Pippy
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