The Hacker

A woman in her late eighties with milleniums of stuble around her left eyeball. she lived on a spaceship called gamma ray 2. Hermother was calling her down to dinner but she was ignoring her. she had just hacked the telly tubbies website, it was a real challenge for her intellect. "Pikey Milkington. come down this instant your Radiocative Slime Balls are getting hot," Pikeys mother vented pure acid.

A contest entry

dont, comment, for a contest, if I get something for it, i'll carry on

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  • Nesa Lyrel
    January 13, 2008

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    Uhh...very....random...

    This was disjointed and lacked grammatical convention. However, amazingly, you DID have a story, though I wish you'd extended it a little more.

    This was a funny little read. If you fix up the grammar and capitalization mistakes, it just might be a random little funny diversion, rather than something so purely...weird (and I mean that in the best of ways!)

    Good luck in the contest


  • PippyFruit
    January 10, 2008

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    Weldone.... these is now in the top ten of the most random things I've ever read. Weldone >o.O<
    Pippy
    xxx