The Mysterious Youth !


Boy With Amazing Chakra, Mysterious Youth Enters Konoha!1

At the gates of Konoha a strange young boy enters the ninja village and he's giving off an energy that the villagers have never seen before it felt like The Kyubi but that was locked within another child. Could it be that this mysterious youth just had more chakra than normal kids his age had?2

The Guards watched closely as the child walked into the village there was nothing known about this boy and they let him pass only because he looked like he wasn't a menace. If he was a menace they would of probably stopped him.3

People started to chatter as the boy entered there were no emotion in the boy's eyes. He was dressed oddly too. He was wearing a pair of black jeans and his shirt was ripped and he had knicks and cuts on his arms and on his face.4

His hair was as black as night and two strands of his black hair dangled in front of his face and the rest of his hair was sorta spiked up. It just made him look a little more menacing than he actually was.5

The news of a new arrival in The Village of Kohona would reach the ears of Team 7's leader, Kakashi Hatake.6

The Copy Ninja of The Village like always Kakashi was somewhere desolating and quiet reading his book.7

The Copy Ninja turned the pages and looked down at the words and he turned red somewhat as he turned another page and the wind blew which ruffled the leaves of the tree that the copy ninja was sitting under.8

He kept reading as the wind blew and as the wind blew he felt something to be off in the village.9

He didn't know what it was so he shook his head continued to read his book. He flipped the pages and he read the words on the pages and they were very interesting and he chuckled to himself as the wind blew by again.10

For some reason it was windy today and that was strange within itself because it was usually peaceful in this village and bad weather never really came near it.11

"Kakashi-sensei!" The blonde boy, Naruto yelled.12

Naruto hung upside down from a tree branch and he smirked at his sensei and itched the back of his head playfully and than his feet gave away and than Naruto feel into the lap of Kakashi-sensei and Kakashi's book was flung to the side as Naruto feel and Naruto hit his head on Kakashi's knee and than he picked himself up off of the ground and he rubbed the back of his head.13

That didn't go the way he had planned he came to find Kakashi in hope that he could get some training in. It didn't look like that was going to happen because Kakashi was too busy with his little perverted book and he could find Ero-sennin so he was truly out of luck but he had had rumors of a boy just walking into Kohona with a mysterious chakra level.14

If that was true maybe he could get some training in that way and it had been a while since he had any serious kind of fight and than Naruto smirked as evil ideas went on inside of his head.15

"Naruto you will never learn." Sakura said.16

Sakura, the pink haired female ninja was walking down a path towards Kakashi and Naruto.17

That Naruto kid was such a moron she didn't know why or how she could stand him but she did. She looked around. The setting was quiet Kakashi must have been reading his book and she walked quietly until she finally came over to Naruto and Kakashi.18

There was only one guy on her mind, Sasuke Uchiha. Amazingly he wasn't here and he was usually the first one here and she'd be the second Naruto and Kakashi are usually the ones that are late. She chuckled softly it was a bit amusing to her.19

She watched Naruto regain his composure and she was felt sorry for him because he was trying to surprise Kakashi-sensei which never goes well for him anyways.20

"All of you found me, now wheres Sasuke?" Kakashi asked.21

"Sasuke?" Naruto asked. "Sakura!" Naruto added.22

"I don't know where he is either." Sakura said, her eyes looking at the ground and all the emotion in her voice was plagued with worry and sadness.23

Sasuke spyed on the new kid, Sasuke was hidden in a tree and he could feel the kids energy. It was so high and it was quite amazing it felt like Naruto's energy when he got mad but he knew the kid wasn't Naruto and he didn't know if the kid was a menace or not because the guards just let this kid walk through the gates of Konoha. He didn't know why oldman Hokage had it set up that way.24

He continued to watch the boy and he wasn't going to make a move on him yet.25

He'd only do that if he was provoked or if he had anything to prove and he hoped that this didn't get out he didn't want Naruto getting rirst crack at this boy he wanted to be the first person to fight this boy.26

This way he could prove that he was truly better than Naruto! Sakura might worry about him but that didn't really matter to him he needed to defeat this boy by himself.27

If the kid provoked him and he thought of ways he could get the kid provoked.28

An evil smile gleemed on Sasuke Uchiha's face. 29

"You got amazing chakra, kid. I don't know where you came from and I don't really care. I'm not letting Naruto get to you first. I'm going to get to you first and than finally I would have proven to Naruto and everyone else in this pathetic village. That I'm THE BEST!" Sasuke said to himself as he watched the kid from his tree. 30

The chakra inside of him seemed to be growing by the minute it was almost like it was alive and had a mind of it's own.
The cuts and scraps on the boys face were present it looked like he just got done fighting and there was a tear on his right sleeve of his shirt and it looked like the right armed sleeve was going to fall off and there was a 10" hole in the left knee of the pants that the kid was wearing.31

They were black and almost looked like the darkness itself. He could feel another prescence around and he just couldn't figure out who and there seemed to be alot of villagers in this village.
Could one of these villagers be getting ready to attack him? If so he needed to stay on his toes he couldn't chance getting jumped in this town.32

Little did he know his paranoia was right and he couldn't put his finger on it and he could usually figure out where his would be attacker would be. He looked around and he couldn't see anyone that wanted to attack him and than he turned around and looked at a tree he looked up and down it but no one was there.
It was strange because he could feel some chakra coming from where the tree is maybe his chakra sensing was screwed up from the last fight that he was in. 33

He had just got done fighting an Uchiha and he barely escaped with his life and than he had to watch his village being burned down and there was no way he could have saved it. The Uchiha that he fought was a really good fighter and he saw it in The Uchiha's eyes that he was gone within the realms of insanity and when they fought he could tell that.
The Uchiha wanted to kill him because he saw something that he shouldn't have seen.
The Uchiha's face burned into his memory he would never forget that face and when they meet again he would utterly destroy that Uchiha.34

Sasuke peered from another tree that was surrounding the middle of the village and he watched the kid wander around aimlessly. It was a perfect oppertunity to jump the boy but something stopped him.
He sensed the chakra level of the bow rise and fall it was like when the kid inhaled and exhaled his chakra level went up and down.
That seemed strange to Sasuke.
He'd never seen something so akward could it be this kid somehow had living chakra inside of him and that it was connected to his nero-net inside of his head? 35

No that couldn't be possible all chakra was is life energy that you called upon in battles to use attacks and form seals. It couldn't be controlled subconciously.
Could it? If anyone would know his sensei, Kakashi would but he was off reading his perverted book and Sakura and Naruto probably had caught up with him and they were probably annoying him and Naruto was probably begging Kakashi to train him some more. Sasuke chuckled to himself softly and he kepts his eyes on the boy.36

Sasuke had been iching for a fight ever since he got back from the last mission and him and Naruto almost got in there but gladly Kakashi and Sakura were there to break it up.
If they hadn't Naruto and himself might have ended up dead and he couldn't have that but it annoyed him how Sakura always butted in when Naruto and him would try and fight.
He thought it was because on some level he thought that Sakura had feelings for Naruto. That would crack him up the princess, Sakura have feelings for that dropout loser, Naruto!37

He chuckled both Naruto and Sakura were losers and the only one in his squad that he had anything in common with was the copy ninja, Kakashi Hatake.
Kakashi never really talked much about his past but he knew that he was somehow involed with the other Uchihas.
It wasn't possible for all of his family to be dead there had to be someone of his bloodline left.
He shook his head from side-to-side this wasn't the time to be thinking about this he had an objective and he had to have it completed.38

"Uchiha!" The Kid screamed as he spotted Sasuke.
"Shit! He found me?!" Sasuke said in shock.
"You won't escape so easily this time!" The Kid yelled. 39


The Kid run towards the tree that Sasuke was sitting in and he extended his leg in a kick and he charged chakra to the bottom of his foot and on impact the tree broke directly in half.
The top half with Sasuke felt right and the bottom half broke to the left side and he watched The Uchiha jump from the top of the tree to a roof and he looked up at The Uchiha and he saw The Uchiha stareback.
This was the moment he was waiting for he had finally caught up with The Uchiha that raided his village and killed everyone in it. But he looked different this time. No matter. He had to PAY!40

With the crashing of the large oak tree and Sasuke jumping onto a nearby roof.
It caused alot of comotion and the two started to get alot of attention The Kid stood where the tree used to be and he glared up at Sasuke.
He had come to believe that this was the Uchiha that had attacked the village he lived and killed everyone in the village including his family and his friends. 41

His eyes narrowed at Sasuke and you could see the anger and the hatred inside of him.
It was like it was surfacing outside of his body all of his anger and his hate and that would consume him.
He channeled his emotions into energy it was how he kept such a high level of chakra. 42

These were the eyes of a person that was about ready to give up everything that he had in his life.
He was going to give it all up for one thing and that thing was revenge.
What the Uchiha did to his village was not excuseable and the Uchiha must pay for his crimes! 43

The two ninjs would stare at each other and they both had there arms crossed and as the wind blew it blew through both of there hands.
Sasuke's black hair moved slowly infront of his face and he smirked and than moved his forehead protector and than pointed at it and than smirked again. 44

Sasuke was taunting the kid now and he knew it.
This battle wouldn't belong and it would probably be over before it even started because Sasuke was that good and no one ever really lasted that long when they went up against an Uchiha. 45

He saw the kid's eyes and they were filled with anger and hate.
Could this kid be power hungry was he seeking something or someone when he came here? Or was it just an odd coincedence? It didn't matter and Sasuke continued to smirk smugly. 46

"Let's see how good you really are." Sasuke said and as he spoke he reached for his ninja tools in the pouch that he wore on the side of his belt and he looked at the kid. He had no ninja tools. How did he expect to fight without them? 47

The Kid didn't say anything and he looked up and Sasuke and saw that he was reaching into a pouch that was on his hip.
He was probably reaching for his ninja tools and The Kid didn't use ninja tools anymore.48

Sasuke grabbed a handfull of Kunai and slipped 5 of them around all of his fingers.
He jumped from the roof he was standing on and than he spread his fingers and launched the kunai at the kid that was standing there. 49

"So it begins." The Kid said in a soft voice. 50

He watched the Kunai come towards him all 5 of them and than he crossed his arms infront of his face and body and he mummbled something under his breathe.
He summoned some of his chakra and as he did so a white-blue barrior of energy surrouned them and Sasuke's Kunai bounced off of The Chakra barrier.51

"Earth Style : Shattering Earth!" The Kid yelled. 52

Sasuke stood in the air shocked and as he looked down he saw something very disturbing.
It was two rock hands grabbing after him and one grabbed his leg and attempted to drag him down into the dirt and than Sasuke performed The Katon Jutsu and a large firball emerged from his mouth and hit the rock hands.
One still attatched to Sasuke's ankle and it broke off. 53

"Interesting, Uchiha. You used Katon earlier than you did last time.
I expected a weaker attack to fight off my Rock Hands. By the way that's a jutsu I devolped. It was quite fun to devolp I might add." The Kid said smirking. 54

Sasuke looked at The Kid and his eyes twitched in utter rage.
The Kid was scouting him but how? He was hidden and had he fought this person before? He'd never seen this kid before in his life.
The Kid must be mistaken him for someone else. Eitherway they still were going to fight. Sasuke needed to come out on TOP! 55

Sasuke than charged at the kid and he threw a kick and as The Kid dodged.
Sasuke punched him in the stomache it was one of his feint techniques and it was used in fighting alot. Make your opponent think your gonna go one way and than go another.56

The Kid was hit in the stomache by The Uchiha. He spit out some blood as he was hit.
Than he looked up at The Uchiha with his eyes narrowed and he just started to get angry and that wasn't really good for Sasuke because when he got Angry he wouldn't care anymore and he would kill whoever stood in his way. 57

The Kid than extended his right leg and than kicked Sasuke upside the head.
The kick had so much force that Sasuke was sent flying back towards the house that he had been standing on.
He watched The Uchiha regain his composure before he had hit the house and that was expected of an Uchiha.
They were excellent fighters and so was this one too. 58

"Phoenix flower jutsu!" Sasuke yelled.59

Sasuke than gathered the chakra that was in his throat and than he blew out 10 tiny fireballs.
They were heading right for The Kid and Sasuke felt good about this attack and there wasn't anyway you could really dodge and they inched towards The Kid's face and when they would hit it would hurt like hell. 60

The Kid put his arms up infront of his face trying to block the attack.
There was no way of avoiding this attack and the fireballs touched The Kid's skin and they burned like hell.
It was like he was being touched by the coals of hell itself that's how much it hurt. He would fight through the pain and he wasn't going to let this Uchiha get the upperhand!61

"Elemental Jutsu : Fire Energy!" The Kid Yelled. 62

The Chakra around The Kid started to turn red and and it looked like his energy was turned to pure fire and The Kid smirked.
Now if The Uchiha shot any fire-based attacks at him they would be absorbed into his chakra and it would add to his life force!63

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"What's that Energy?" Kakashi asked.
"I Sense it too, Sensei.. One of them is Sasuke!" Naruto said.
"It's coming from The Village!" Kakashi said. 65

Can Naruto, Sakura and Kakashi get to the village before This Boy and Sasuke destroy it fighting?! 66

"I didn't think I would have to use this power so soon!" Sasuke said. 67

Sasuke's curse mark on his neck it began to burn. It felt as if the fires of hell were burning on his skin.
He could sense the kid's chakra and he could see it visibly.
It was much greater than his own power even thou he was giving it a little boost right now and Sasuke didn't really have a chance to test out his new power because of the people in the village and Kakashi. 68

The curse mark spread from his shoulder and than all the way down his shoulder and onto his arm.
It also spread onto his hand and than it started to spread onto his chest and than finally it spread onto his face and onto the right side of his face and the left side of his face was left untouched.69

There was no way that the kid could get him now. No way because there was no power that could beat Orochimaru's curse mark.
He was untouchable in the forest when he took out those sound Ninjas and he narrowed his eyes at the kid and he was wondering who would make the next move.
Would it be him or would it be the kid? 70

He dug his feet into the ground waiting for an attack but it didn't come. He stared into the kid's eyes and wondered what he was planning. This irritated Sasuke he usually knew what someone was going to do in a battle but he could barely read this kid's moves. He couldn't be getting rusty could he? It couldn't be possible. He was an Elite Ninja he knew every trick in the book and than some! 71

The Kid rushed at Sasuke which would catch him off guard and than he punched Sasuke in the gut.
Which would stun him for a few moments, and than he grabbed Sasuke by the neck and threw him at a building. He than jumped behind Sasuke and than onto the building and than grabbed him by the hair and than smashed his face into the ground which made a small dent in the ground. 72

He followed up by grabbing Sasuke's left arm and than swinging him around and throwing him towards a tree. He than ran after Sasuke that was being flung towards the tree and he pushed some chakra into the soles of his shoes and than kicked Sasuke as hard as he could in the back and as Sasuke hit the tree it shattered into a million peices. It looked like Sasuke was destroyed but he didn't think an Uchiha would got down that fast and easy.
They were the only true Ninja Warriors in Konoha.
They were the most Elite Ninja in the world and maybe The Universe. 73

He figured that The Uchiha would get up and he hoped that he would get up because he wasn't done. He needed to fight some-more and make his point made. He wasn't doing this for blood or honor he was doing this simply to get revenge on him.
For what he did to his family and for what he did to his home. Something like this couldn't be forgave!74

"Get up, Uchiha! Get up so I can break you.. So I can KILL YOU!"75

"Kill me?" Sasuke asked getting up. "You honestly think, you got enough chakra to KILL ME?!"76

A mix of Sakura's normal chakra and the blue and black chakra that was the curse max was now coming off of him. There was no way this little punk was going to kill an UCHIHA! They were the best the most elite warriors in Kohona and this kid comes in and thinks he can defeat him! That kid was DEAD WRONG! He won't defeat this UCHIHA! Sasuke was going to make dead sure of that!77

Sasuke balanced himself out and looked over at The Kid his eyes narrowed as narrowed as they could be.
He was planning a master attack this wouldn't defeat the kid but it would slow him down. He could feel that the Kid's chakra was becoming weaker because he could see his fire energy disappearing little by little with every attack the kid would make his chakra would lower. It was the perfect time for him to STRIKE! 78

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Kakashi ran through the training forest that lead to the Village and he could feel the two chakras in the village. One felt over-powered and the one that had been dominate for a few minutes was now weakened Kakashi had a very bad feeling about this.
If this powerful Chakra was Sasuke that meant he had activated Orochimaru's curse mark and was now fighting with it! 80

The would mean every minute that he fought that would mean it would be only a matter of time until the evil chakra took over Sasuke and than he would be too far gone to save.
Kakashi really hopped it wasn't Sasuke but something in his gut told him that it was Sasuke. 81

Naruto and Sakura jumped from branch to branch with Kakashi and they hoped it wasn't Sasuke either. They both knew different and they both knew it was Sasuke because no one else in The Village had Chakra like that except maybe Naruto.
There eyes kept on the path that lead to Konoha in a few minutes they came to the entrance to Konoha and they looked through the gates and there was Sasuke and The Mysterious Youth.82

"Sasuke, you dumbass.." Kakashi said as he looked over at Sasuke.
"The Cursemark!" Sakura yelled in horror.
"We gotta stop him, Kakashi-sensei!" Naruto said. 83

Kakashi stared at both of the fighters Sasuke and The Mysterious youth and he could sense that The Mysterious Youth wasn't going to last longer until someone stepped in and attempted to save him or become his ally. 84

Kakashi put his hand under his chin and began his thought processes.
Sasuke probably didn't really know they were there because he was too busy being his hot-headed self thinking he could take anyone out at any point in time. He wanted to keep his distance from Sasuke he knew how powerful that Uchiha was. 85

Naruto and Sakura were too shaken up to go into battle.
It would seem Sakura was a little more shaken up than Naruto was.
He could see that Naruto was itching to fight Sasuke and that was another reason why he didn't want Naruto to get invovled. 86

"I can't take this anymore,sensei!" Naruto said. 87

Naruto than dashed from the training area and than jumped Sasuke.
Taking him down with one shot and throwing him a crossed the village and Naruto stood infront of The Mysterious Youth who was down to one knee and huffing.88

Naruto kept his eyes on Sasuke as he watched him get up and started to walk towards Naruto. He knew he pissed Sasuke off but that was the way he was. He wasn't going to stand by and watch Sasuke beat this Mysterious youth up. 89

"Your gonna pay for this,Naruto!" Sasuke yelled.90

Naruto sheilded the boy as he watched Sasuke get up and walk towards him and he could see the anger and hate in his eyes.
This wasn't the Sasuke that he had become friends with this was the evil Sasuke that the freak in the forest had made.
Either way Naruto had to gather his thoughts and he was going to have to fight Sasuke even if he didn't want to and there was another thing on his mind. Where did this boy come from and why was he fighting Sasuke? 91

He couldn't let those thoughts make him loose his focus on his objective. He had to beat Sasuke and save the kid.
He saw the kid fight and he knew that he wasn't a stranger to fighting. The weird chakra that the kid had kinda caught him off guard. He's never felt something so powerful?
Was that the way people felt about him? That he was just a tool or weapon for the village? He had too many questions and not enough answers. 92

Naruto readied his kunai that was in the palm of his hand and his eyes narrowed as he watched Sasuke walk towards him.
He looked calm and almost jubliant and what was that? Was Sasuke actually smiling.
His eyes still narrowed on The Uchiha. Naruto was ready for everything and anything. 93

The battle was at hand and Sasuke smirked as he walked towards Naruto.
He was calm and he smirked lightly and it was perfect that Naruto jumped in and that meant they will find out which one is really stronger. 94

He looked to his right and he saw Kakashi and Sakura.
He was surprised that they weren't trying to stop Naruto.
Maybe they finally saw it that this had to happen that they had to finally figure out who was stronger between The Leaf Ninjas.95

He than turned and looked back at Naruto a menacing smile on his face.
He walked for a few more moments and than looked at Naruto and than smiled evily at him as his arms dangled at his sides.
His eyes would look right through Naruto.96

"You saving someone you don't even know nor care about. That's so like you, loser." Sasuke said with a harsh tone and his words cut like razorblades.97

Naruto saw what Sasuke was trying to do he was trying to make him anger and make him attack first. That wasn't going to happen today because he actually had a plan to beat Sasuke today and it wouldn't fail! He was gonna prove to Sasuke and himself that he was one of the best Ninjas in The VILLAGE! 98

It had always been this way even when he was a youngling and they were kids together. Everybody loved Sasuke! Everyone wanted to be Sasuke's a friend and what did Naruto get? Nothing! He got hated because he had a demon within him but no more! 99

Naruto grew angry and as he did his chakra flared up and his eyes were fixed on Sasuke.
He wasn't going to pass this up and Sasuke wanted to fight.
So Naruto was going to fight and he was going to win and he didn't care about the boy anymore now it had become personal! 100

"So loser your riled up.. Shall we comence now?!" Sasuke asked. 101

Sasuke had an evil smile on his face and dark intentions in his eyes. He felt the amazing power he had as he collected his chakra.
A purple and black swirl of chakra energy swirled around him in a clockwise and counter-clockwise motion.
His eyes had turned slight red but his shoulder started to hurt.
He couldn't use his sharingan. Which meant this might take longer than he had planned. 102

Sasuke had no intentions of losing his eyes locked with Narutos.
He wondered who was going to make the first move and he had taken some injurys when he was fighting with the kid.
He hopped those didn't stop him from ripping Naruto apart limb from limb. This power he had was almost equal to Naruto's Demon Fox power and abilties. He smirked. They were at equal level now. 103

If he charged in Naruto would probably avoid it and he knew all of his attacks.
It was a pickle indeed and he hadn't invented any new attacks either he just had his jutsus that he had learned from his clan.
What was he to do? A few moments later he rushed at Naruto with a right kick to the gut. 104

Naruto was stunned from Sasuke's kick to the gut and than he rebounded.
He kicked Sasuke in the mouth which sent Sasuke falling backwards and than Naruto charged at Sasuke and hit him multiple times in the abdomen and than kicked him in the abdomen which sent him flying a crossed the village. 105

Naruto ran under Sasuke and climbed a tree and than jumped onto a roof.
He saw an opening and with both of his fists doubled up and together he hit Sasuke on the neck which sent him hurling to the ground fast and it made a large thudding sound. 106

A few minutes the dust cleared and there was a meduim sized hole in the middle of the town.
Naruto looked and saw that Sasuke was laying faced down in the hole.
He couldn't be beaten that fast could he? No. Sasuke was strong and about as strong as he was there was no way Sasuke could be beaten that easily. He refused to beleive that! 107

Sasuke began to start moving inside of the hole and he had forgotten how strong Naruto was.
He was on his knees and he climbed out of the hole on his hands and knees he had a few scrapes and scrathes on his face from when he hit the ground. 108

There was no way that Naruto was going to when with an attack like that.
He narrowed his eyes at Naruto and he thought about his next attack.
The one that had happened a few moments ago was brutal.
He didn't know Naruto was that fast or that strong and this was definately going to talk longer than he expected. 109

Sasuke than charged at Naruto again and it looked like he was going to hit Naruto head on. Sasuke than vanished behind of Naruto and grabbed Naruto by the neck and than threw him into the air and than hit Naruto in the chin with multiple kicks. 110

Than he jumped behind of him and kicked him in the back which sent Naruto hurling towards the ground and he hit hard in the hole Sasuke was laying in. 111

The Mysterious Kid stood there on one knee and watched them fight.
He saw the blonde headed kid hit the ground pretty hard and it looked almost like the blonde kid went unconcious.
He still had questions why had he saved him? He wouldn't have done anything and he wanted to stay and fight! 112

The Mysterious Kid looked on with horror as he saw the other boy standing where the hole was grinning. It wasn't a normal grin it was an evil psychotic grin and he recognized it. 113

The guy that killed his family had that same grin on his face! He wasn't going to let him get away this time. He may be tired but he wasn't out! He would fight to death even if that meant he died!114

"Naruto!" Sakura yelled from the sidelines.
"It just turned deadly." Kakashi said.
"Uch...i..ha." The Mysterious Kid said as he huffed. 115


"Sasuke, I'll have something you'll never have!" Naruto yelled as he stood there. His blonde hair swaying in the wind as it blew and as he looked at Sasuke it was sad that it had come down to his two friends fighting on the opposites sides of Konhoa's Ninja Laws.
It was unheard of two Ninja's from the same village to fight for no reason. There might have been a reason here but no one really knew what that reason was. 116

It was true that they were both rivals and wanted to show each other up.
Naruto never thought it would come to this. He was in his fighting stance and was standing a crossed from Sasuke and he knew there were other people watching.
He didn't know what this would do to Sakura because she loved him. He didn't think Sasuke was capeable of love. He glanced over towards Sakura, Kakashi and The Un-named boy that he had just saved from Sasuke. 117

The cool breeze was the only thing that was really comforting him.
He than looked back at Sasuke he could see the rage that was living on his face. He couldn't let Sasuke get away from that.
The anger that built inside of him would be turned into power and he knew if he could enough of his anger into power he could someone the demon that was trapped inside of him.118

He knew that Sasuke was powerful and know he was powered by Orochimaru's curse-mark.
He was afraid that Sasuke would goto Orochimaru seeking more power and he knew that Sasuke's power was fuelled by hatred and anger for what happened to his family he most likely blamed himself. 119


"What's that, loser?" Sasuke asked a chuckle was present in his voice. 120

Sasuke knew that they weren't equals but at the current standings Sasuke was stronger than Naruto. He got into his fighting stance also and he would taunt Naruto first he wanted to see Naruto get mad and see the power that he had inside of him the power that he was holding back. 121

He knew about Naruto's sinister chakra he had saw and felt that chakra when they were in The Forrest Of Death.
He could clearly see that Naruto was powerful and the way he dismantled those Water Ninjas was quit astounding and impressive. 122

It had always been about who was better him or Naruto? He would guess that they would find out today.
A small smirk came over his face as he stood there and he made a sign with his hands and as he did his chakra level would start to raise a light blue aura appeared around him. 123

The curse mark on his face it started to blink from black to red and than red to black. It looked like it was trying to fully take over him and Sasuke had to have control over his powers or this fight would mean nothing.
His eyes shifted from Naruto to Sakura, Kakashi and The Mysterious Youth. It was an odd occurance that this was going to happen today. 124

"The urge to protect the people you love!" Naruto yelled. 125

Naruto's anger exploded as he also made a hand sign and than a light blue aura appeared around him.
His chakra power level started to go up as he was trying to keep it level with Sasuke's.
He didn't want to fight Sasuke because he still considered him a friend and friend's don't fight like this but he didn't really have any choice. 126

Naruto would make more hand signs and than he would mummble something.
People were too far away to hear anything and than about 30 clones of himself appeared and they ran at Sasuke. They started striking against The Uchiha hitting and kicking as fast as they could. 127

Naruto would watch the clones fight Sasuke but than in a giant puff of white-grey smoke the Naruto clones were gone and Sasuke was just standing there and it looked like he didn't even have a scratch on his face and he expected him to get hit just once. 128

Naruto had to think up a plan fast and than he started charging at Sasuke.
He had his arm extended and his fist was balled up at out of anger and than he kept on running towards Sasuke.
He had an idea maybe he could just hit Sasuke that'd slow him down wouldn't it? 129

Sasuke watched Naruto run after him and than he watched Naruto attempt to punch him.
Sasuke grabbed Naruto's fist in his palm and than did a swift kick to Naruto's gut which sent him flying back against a tree and he flew by Kakashi and Sakura and he watched Naruto go through a tree and the side of a building. 130

It was too easy fighting Naruto he wouldn't last long against Sasuke.
He watched Naruto fall to the ground and he would hope that Naruto would get up because doing this was quite fun. An evil smile came over Sasuke's face and he looked demonic.131

This power that Orochimaru had given him had came in handy right now.
Sasuke looked over towards where Naruto was and he saw that Naruto was moving. He was shocked a little bit but he knew how presistant Naruto was and that presistance would be Naruto's undoing.132

Naruto picked himself up off of the ground and he narrowed his eyes at Sasuke.
He could see Sasuke staring at him from a far.
This had to be done and Sasuke had to be defeated so he could become his oldself and than Naruto started walking back toward's the battlefield. 133

He passed Kakashi and Sakura who looked surprised that he had gotten up from a kick like that.
The orange and black jacket he was wearing was torn and his eyes were focused on Sasuke and he wasn't going to let this go. 134

They may have had similar past but this wasn't something he would do.
He knew Sasuke was a good guy and that the power Orochimaru had given him was messing with his mind. He had to do what was right and he had to defeat Sasuke.135

He had to forget about the bonds that he had with Sasuke.
They were enemies now and he was back on the battle field and Sasuke was standing a crossed from him and than Naruto charged after Sasuke like he was going to hit him but instead of hitting him he leg sweeped Sasuke.136

With all of his energy Naruto uppercutted Sasuke about 5 times and than jumped behind him.
He doubled both of his fists inside each other and used a double fisted slam which sent Sasuke crashing toward's the ground and it made a dent in the earth below.137

"Sasuke!" Sakura yelled.
"Damn." The Mysterious Youth said glancing at Naruto.138

"Who are you?" Kakashi asked The Unnamed Youth
"Does it really matter?" The Mysterious Youth asked.
"Yes it does, they could kill each other. I need to know who you are and why you started to fight Sasuke." 139

"My name's Taki." The Mysterious Youth said with a small sigh. "I came for The Uchiha because he killed my family." The Mysterious Youth Added.

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  • Kyoshoro Wolf
    January 17, 2008
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    Good story though there were a few errors.A good job with the fight scene and keeping the suspense of the youth to the end.It's nice to know there's another Uchiha.Good luck in the contest.