Like, !!

ROSEalieBUSH: omgsh!! alice!! y didn’t u call me after skool?! i have smthn 2 tell u!1

AliceinprncessLnd: sry dude, the ‘rents were totally freaking out about my celli…2

ROSEalieBUSH: oh, about you dropping it in the toilet?3

AliceinprncessLnd: right on… i mean, i said i was sry like 5000 times, yeah? I mean, its not easy 2 talk on my cell AND str8en my hair at the same time!! do they expect me to be some kind of pro?!4

ROSEalieBUSH: ugh, talk about high expectations! gosh… they’re buying u a new 1 tho, right?5

AliceinprncessLnd: no!! can u believe it?! They say i have 2 pay for my own bc i was irresponsible or wtvr… p-rents are soo annoying!! where do they even come up w/ this stuff?!6

ROSEalieBUSH: tell me about it… they just don’t understand! how are we supposed 2 TALK when u don’t have a phone?7

AliceinprncessLnd: i told them that! & get this, they said : “use the house phone” !!!!!! and EVEN WORSE if that’s possible, their second suggestion was “or hey, u could just talk 2 us” !!!!!!!!!!!8

ROSEalieBUSH: *gasp* no!!!!9

AliceinprncessLnd: yes!10

ROSEalieBUSH: they wouldn’t… would they?11

AliceinprncessLnd: they so would. and they sooo did. & like, y can’t they buy the new phone? they know i need that $$ for clothes!! like, duh!! it’s so unjust!12

ROSEalieBUSH: ugh… im soo feeling ur pain! don’t worry, we’ll just find a way 2 raise $$ and before u know it, this dark, dark time will b over!13

AliceinprncessLnd: i so hope ur right rosalie… anyways, what did u need 2 tell me?14

ROSEalieBUSH: ack! I was so distracted by ur plight that i almost 4got!15

AliceinprncessLnd: aww… you’re such a great friend! but u do remember, right?16

ROSEalieBUSH: it’s 2 good for me 2 have completely 4gotten!17

AliceinprncessLnd: its that good?! ahhh!! just tell me! im dying here! 18

ROSEalieBUSH: ok. so. it’s about mike.19

AliceinprncessLnd: mike?! NO WAY!20

ROSEalieBUSH: YES WAY! On the bus after skool…21

ROSEalieBUSH: it was like, way super crowded…22

ROSEalieBUSH: & i was sitting by myself…23

ROSEalieBUSH: & he came over….24

ROSEalieBUSH: & asked if he could sit with me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!25

AliceinprncessLnd: OHMIGOSH! U R SO LUCKY! 26

AliceinprncessLnd: this is even better than that time u said hi 2 him in the hallway!27

ROSEalieBUSH: i know! he even spoke 2 me this time!28

ROSEalieBUSH: OMG! its even better than that time at lunch when he was like, looking in my direction the whole ENTIRE time! I mean, yah, his gf was sitting in his line of sight 2, but like, she’s nothing 2 look at if u know what i mean….29

AliceinprncessLnd: i totally do, u r WAY prettier. & have better clothes!30

ROSEalieBUSH: rlly? u think so?31

AliceinprncessLnd: i know so! it’s the truth… and it looks like mike cannot deny it!!32

ROSEalieBUSH: i hope he can’t! i mean, 2day is proof right? he asked 2 sit by ME! 33

AliceinprncessLnd: *sigh* u r like such a living fairytale! …i bet i know something else he’ll ask u! 34

ROSEalieBUSH: wat?! 35

AliceinprncessLnd: 2 go 2Cupid’s Dance-o-Rama with him!36

ROSEalieBUSH: eeek! that would b the most romantic thing EVER!!!37

ROSEalieBUSH: i know i m only in 7th grade… but i will die if he doesn’t ask me out… i think i am in LOVE. like total, true, real LOVE.38

AliceinprncessLnd: oh my gosh… u so r.39

AliceinprncessLnd: ugh. u have all the luck, 2day all that happened with tyler was that he made a paper airplane and threw it 2 emmett who was behind me, only instead of going 2 him, it hit me in the head.40

ROSEalieBUSH: aww… but that could b something! i bet he aimed at u! 41

AliceinprncessLnd: really? maybe… that would b awesome!42

ROSEalieBUSH: omgggg…. what if tyler asks u 2 Cupid’s Dance-o-Rama and mike asks me!? we could all 4 go 2gether!43

AliceinprncessLnd: yikes! That would b ahmazing!!! It would def. b the BEST nite of my life EVER!44

ROSEalieBUSH: ugh i g2g.. dinner… i bet we’re having meat even tho i TOLD my mom that im a vegetarian now. But she was just all “aww rosy, i didn’t know u cared about the animals!” and i was like “duh mom, i don’t. i want 2 lose 5 lbs.” i m so over her sometimes…45

AliceinprncessLnd: ugh… like we said, ‘rentals r so out of it!46

ROSEalieBUSH: true dat! ttyl! =)47

AliceinprncessLnd: lylas!!! =P48

Author notes

I wrote this for a school assignment to Exaggerate something. I exaggerated 7th grade girls. It was quite fun

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  • LadyLionnir
    January 9, 2008

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    lol, I couldn't help but laugh through out the whole thing and felt myself amazed at how well you portrayed the conversation. It had me believing you were a 7th grader, but I'm pretty sure you're not. Anyways, it was really incredible and I found humor in it. Good job! Bet you got a great grade.

    • madgirlslovesong
      January 18, 2008
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      I'm not anymore, but I once was, and a lot like this too. It was pretty sad to think that my conversations back then ran a lot along these lines... and worrysome that this was so easy to write- after all, I'd had experience even though it's been a few years!

      Thanks for the feedback!


  • Red Mistress
    January 9, 2008
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    you've captured the preteen world

    annoying just like seventh grade girls