Let me drown in you.

"Your eyes wide open,
your clothes torn on the floor.
Even if I wanted to stop,
you'd come crawling, begging for more.1

Slick an sweaty,
skin red hot.
once we begin,
we just can't stop
(take me)"2

The Crowd screamed louder and louder as the song continued on.3

"As you take control,
my head begins to spin.
you know just where to touch,
you now just how to win.4

Slick an sweaty,
skin red hot.
once we begin,
we just can't stop
(save me)"5

Adrian closed his golden eyes and sunk deeper into oblivion, the crowd around him pulsing with heat and excitement.6

"your nails digging deep,
while I thrust in deeper.
lets end this charade,
let me make you my keeper.7

Slick an sweaty,
skin red hot.
once we begin,
we just can't stop
(use me)"8

Adrian opened his eyes, fixing them on the singer as the coda began to play.9

"Slick deep inside,
sweat on your skin.
our hearts are beating faster,
as we climax to our sin."10

For a breath, no longer, the singer's eyes connected with Adrian's. As gold stared into violet, he completed the final line.11

"Let me drown in you"

Author notes

hhmmm... notes.... I like eggs.

Characters from mydarlinghamburger's story 'Night Shift' go read it!!! nownownownow!!!!
>>> http://storywrite.com/story/124439 <<<

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  • VintageEyes
    January 11, 2008
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    :]

    i like your notes. :]



    i used to have a friend named jade.


    haha.


    well i liked it.


  • mydarlinghamburger
    January 9, 2008

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    WoW... now make it a full story... DO IT!!!!

    now now now now now now now now now now now now now now now now now now now now now now now now now now now now now now now now now now now now now now now now now now now now now now now now now now now now now now now now now now now now now now now now now now

    Lol.. yes that is a selfish demand...

    this was awesum...

    Pls continue...

    Much Love, Lila xoxo


    • Hitsuzen
      January 10, 2008
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      yeah... way too lazy. *goes to sleep*


      • Violet Hawthorne
        January 10, 2008
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        well wake up then because man this was awesome you really have too make it into a series!!!!!!