Unnacompanied Minors-Part one

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Kalinda Reeba and Jake Florance the teen detective group sat in the living room talking about their next case,"The Unaccompanied minors",Lisa Frank and her brother George Frank.They went missing recently after their babysitter went out to get them some lunch and left her dog (Pavia her guard)in charge.The dog was found on the veranda half-dead and  the children's plates ( they were playing beans) were scattered on the ground.2

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Hannah Lee,head detective was on the scene.Kalinda and Jake were called about the case and they quickly hopped into their convertible and they were there  in 2 minutes.The children were very fond of Kalinda as she used to take care of them when they were 5 and 6 but soon Kalinda became a detective and was busy working on the mind botting cases.Jake stepped up to the huge mansion the children lived in.Then Jake said gloomingly,"No wonder they kidnapped them the house was so big and besides im sure they didnt want any suspects."4

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"Sure they didnt!",said Kalinda excitedly "but look a note on the ground!""Well read it later but i wonder what became of the helper......"8

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Then Jake said "Lets go ask but first what does the note say ?"12

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Kalinda read quietly " From George and Lisa,Help us please some physco kidnapped us and took us into this truck i dont know what to tell you now.My mother told us to write an emergency letter in case we get kidnapped, i put in the word truck when he wasnt looking.I know you can help.Bye !"14

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"Thats how it ended,Jake"18

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Then Jake said "Lets go and ask-"22

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Suddenly a car drove up in the drive way it was the babysitter.The first thing she said was " What happened!?"And ypu know what Hannah Lee told her.EVERTHING.24

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We ran inside to see what clues we could find and the babysitter followed....26

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To be continued30

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