OverKill

I live with a room mate named Scott he love to eat and laugh. So one day I went to the store to buy his favorite meal which was Mac n' Cheese. I served the food to him the next night but I put poison in the cheese so he will die but he never did he only got sick. So I went to get medicine to CURE him cough..cough.. When I returned home he was in bed smiling at me, it was kind of creepy so I gave him medicine. I kept giving him more and more then he died over joyed I was then I beated him punches, kicks, even biting after all that wonderful blah I took him to the bath tub sliced him up to cubes of flesh and the bones were dissolved with acid that I found in the room. I had blood all over me it was disgusting but he had to die. So I quickly mopped the bloodly floor, did my blood-stained laundry, and cleaned the blood-soked tub. The next day the cops were knocking at my door asking have I see this man but I told them the truth saying yes I did but yesturday was the last time I saw him. They left my room and never asked for me again.1

Four months later no one still guessed who really killed Scott, the cops arrested a guy for killing a Scott but not the Scott I killed. And I thught back on why did I kill Scott but I could not think of the reason. I got fustrated with the question, I threw things because I was mad and cannot find the answer to my own question. So I figured because i'm a loon, I turned my self in and got the death penilty which was the poison go figure. Scott rested in peace after that had happened.2

A contest entry

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  • Krazy Scott
    January 25, 2008

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    Well, thanks for entering, but this is just way too short for serious consideration--about 1,200 words beneath the minimum that I set...


  • Forgotten Anomaly
    January 19, 2008

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    Interesting... but theres a lot of mistakes i found, you should read though this... It was a little fast and blunt for my liking though.


  • wolfmoonsasuke
    January 8, 2008
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    wow.


  • Xscene-massacreX
    January 8, 2008
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    Wow this is coolness. I like the write.


  • TheBlueRoad
    January 8, 2008
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    *tilting my head* ...interesting

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