I remember the night we met.1
We read at the bookstore and bumped in to each other. I was lost in a mountian of books and mangas and you were lost in your own little world as well.Next thing I know,we are in a pile on the floor.We still laugh about it.After numerous "I'm so sorry" 's and "Are you ok?"'s,we laughed and helped each other up.I remember how I felt when you hand touched mine.I felt all warm and soft inside. I think I fell in love with you then.I remember slipping after that and almost knocking you over again,but you caught me that time and I landed against your chest.I recall feeling embarrassed but strangly elated.I never forgot your scent either.You smelled like amber and spice.2
Author notes
Okat folks,I said I would do it and I am,lol.This is just a snaek peek of what I am gonna do. There will be um....er...some lovin' later on in this story,lol. I need you to tell me if you want me to continue this!!!!!!!! And I may need help with editing,hee hee.Please leave your wonderfull thoughts!!!
Please tell me what you think
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Romantic............
It seems like the character is reminiscing over the first meeting of her lover, I guess. It has a few misspellings and seems a bit rushed, but I like the idea of when people first meet.=)=) -
CutE! I's wanna read this as a series ^.^ it would be cute ^.^
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•"We read at the bookstore and bumped in to each other." it should be "into."
•"your own little world as well.Next thing," "a pile on the floor.We still laugh" still laugh about it.After numerous SPACING ERRORS! Mm, a lot of spacing error! Did you type on mobile or something? =)
I think it's a start!
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