The violin of Audric Beaumont I


The Mournful Euphony by Sins of thy beloved 1

As thou await for the embrace of the poudrins
thou hear the roaring of a stormy wind
thou feel a gelid shiver deep within
as thou wonder what will this winter bring2

The spectress of winter are rising
under the pale north star
mist benights the horizon
cold and arcane it appears3

Hearken thy mournful euphony
when wintry tempest so furious sweep
sounds so majestic, a symphony
so enchanting a deep sonorous grief4

Carry me o'mighty winter
to my desolate realm
where i shall narrate my tale of woe
my creed my unseemliness
the northern light above the murky skies
enchaning me it's so divine
as the winter nights slowly enlarges
snow conceals it's winther'd leaves5

I'm thy winter fire
embrace thee with desire
always sorrounding thee
and enswathing thee6

Yet it shall bloom
the mid'winter storm
that compels
the landscape to deform
embellishing in
the enchanting twilight
as the master of winter
evinces his might7

Carry me o'mighty winter
to my desolate realm
where i shall narrate my tale of woe
my creed my unseemliness8

The poudrins embrace my cold realm
so arcane but yet so gracious
it emerged in solemn splendour
so alluring and beyond divine
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Chapter I: Harvest of Deceit 9

Because I could not stop for death, 10

He kindly stopped for me;
The carriage held but just our selves11

and immortality
~Emily dickenson
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It started out simply enough, a single block of wood that was carved and polished till it shone with an inner fire. The brightness of many candles, could not compare to the violin of Audric Beaumont. The wood was chiseled and laced from the darkest mahogany, and was polished till it shone. The strings where always flawless, and in tune. The man, who wield this tool was of slight frame; perhaps enough to say that his color and his size sent many to think that he was ill, but a passion burned within him. It managed to flourish out of his eyes in almost a light of its own. This light, managed to sparkle and shine, and Audric was able to wield it unto the instrument. Its maelstrom came true when it was controlled through his violin. The arching of the bow, and the wave of Audric’s hand acted like a dance of the most eccentric kind, Beautiful, whimsical, and yet daring, as he seemingly attacked the violin with an alacrity that was most inhuman. The strings quivered, and it sent in a harmonious shriek of sonorous noise, and then he reached the climax of the song. The notes he hit where loud and roared like thunder, and it rolled out to a noise that could resemble a cry from a distressed baby. 13

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                   The music sent shivers down my spine and the air around me got colder; my skin reacted as if cold dead hands embraced my soul and ripped it from me, piece by piece. I, inwardly shivered, and squeezed my eyes shut as my vision became momentarily blurry. Perhaps an early prophetic warning, that I knew not of at the time. I, Despite this feeling of cold, felt like I, was burning up from within, and went to remove my outer jacket. As I sat back down, I looked around once again, realizing that the room tended to cast ominous shadows that scraped at every crevice of the room; like hands of demons reaching out towards a unlucky soul. The First appearance of the shadows were normal, but due to the extinguishing lighting now took over a look of pure madness. Audric, seemed not to realize this as he gave himself to the music, and continued to play. Each note that rang out now played faster and faster, building and building. The air seemed cold and stale, like a old crypt, and my steady beating heart faltered by this predicament. I gasped for air, struggled for it! Clean fresh air, and as I did the warm air began to withdraw from my body, from every where and only cold air, seemed to replaced it. The tempature of the room, was now allowing my breath to visibly project in its normally invisible place, even though the room had heat of a fire. I was going to put my cape and jacket on now, and as I rose my legs went numb, frozen in its place. I did not realize it before, but my pants showed outward signs of what was happening internally, as did incidently, parts of the room. So, my clothes started to accumulate little bits of frost, and ice patches grew, they were slowly becoming an imposing threat. I tried to bend my legs back and forth only to receive a rather frightful idea, I no longer felt my legs. My English dignity forbade me to interupt, and truly find out what the problem was. Thus, the next stage of this thing took place.15


I knew now, I could no longer move. My legs were like ice, unable to bend, only break at the smallest amount of pressure. I was now lethargic, and my energy had already died away in a matter of a few minutes. My stiff neck turned, and I saw sitting next to me no longer my wife, whom I have been married to for a few short years but a corpse. Whose mouth stretched back unto her frozen face, her teeth over took her lips, imprinting the once rose color feature into a toothy shriveled smile. The eyes, her eyes, were sunk in and frosted over. Blood has draped down from one of her baby blues eyes, and became frozen in place. It Crystallized forever, like my wife’s features, body and clothes. The air continued to drop into less breathable air, and finally the shrinking fire went out. Without the heat of any fire, the room before my eyes became still as frost, and crystals crept up on to anything. Though it barely mattered at this point in time. In the end, my breathing slowed, and My heart became weary as knew I was to die here. With pain, with acceptance, and with the last of my energy, I closed my hands around that of my wife's and breathed no more. 16


Two candles that were once lit went out with the dying breath of that man, and the world got just a bit colder. Audric stopped with his siren’s song, and a look of satisfaction crossed his face in a fleeting moment of pure insanity. He looked at the bodies, and proceeded to put the violin in its case and strolled over to the deceased resident's gramophone. Frost built upon the object like every thing else within the room. Audric grabbed the handle, and cranked the frozen machine, a multiple of times. A sound from the horn, played the song hand in hand, again. It's irony was not lost to Audric as those hands of the dead husband and wife managed to be laced with each other. He turned, and faced the large heavily frosted windows where the chairs, and the dead where seated. He strolled, over the lightly iced carpets that gave little protest, and went over the bodies. The man was draped over the chair his mouth hung open like a blue fish brought out of water. His lips, where black as was his tongue and fingers, and his skin held a tint that was a mix of grayish white and blue. His eyes, the most horrible feature of all, was rolled back and stuck in an expresstion of shock across his face. Frost formed upon his eyebrows, and crystallized his eyes. The man’s hair transformed from reddish brown to a pale white, and Frost clung to his hair as if it self was alive. The elasticity was gone from his frozen face, no longer was it able to bend to form the common emotions brought on by tragedy and comedy. Audric's face was no longer had a sickly pale tint, his healthy coloring bounced off the yellow tinted light from the fireplace, and the shadows caressed his face lightly daintily until Audric smiled. A smile carved up his mouth; a smile not just of happiness but of madness as well. His eyes seem to register that fact just as much as his smile had. 17

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Audric’s slender and tall shadowed form stooped over the deceased couple. This human monster was still smiling, although to a less of a degree and slowly started to remove their ebon stiffened bony fingers that indented, and froze to the chairs' wooden armrests. Already stuck to those dead; rigor mortis took over. One by one a popping noise continued to break up the 13th hour, just as the grandfather clock struck 2 and started its hymn. Suddenly Audric seized a finger of one of his guests that would not give way. With little strength and determination, he like breaking ice broke, off the index finger of one of his guests. The entire finger as well as a frozen chunk of tissue and bone cracked and caved, red ice sprinkled the air, and became nothing more then particle mist. Audric closed his blazing ice blue eyes, and went over to the man’s wife. In normal standards he and the man were friends, as well as the rest of his small family. No need to believe nor pretend that now though, Dead as they are. His life was much too different then theirs, too distant for them to comprehend. Foolish thinking that it would end differently then any of the others. 19

He went over to the man sprawled over his chair and bent over the still body. The man in addition from suffering from severe frostbite, also managed to accumulate icicles that held on his mustache, despite the fact the room was warm a few minutes before. Then, with no more then a bat of an eyelid, Audric using his right hand grabbed hold of the candlestick that was on the table next to the chair, and smashed it alongside the man’s frozen face, and he relished in the moment of pure unmaking. Audric then, went over to the female, she in life was stunning example of what was, and can never be. Audric bent down close to her corpse and and sniffed the lightly purfumed air around the frozrn statue. "Don't look at me that way, it needed to be done." Acting like the corpse really said any thing at all within her altered state. He bent down close and lightly touched her face with the brush of his fingers, withered and frigid as it was she was now a perfect person; A person that decay could never finger and touch. Though, lightly stroking the Woman’s frigid face on the cheek, was enough to cause the lady’s fragile and frosted form to collapse unto its self. Her insides the equivalent of permafrost, her entire body shattered and broke on contact. What replaced her was a pile of broken bits of crystal. Once upon a time, a whole person was there, all that remained now, was dust, and a frozen finger attached to the wedding ring that settled upon Audric’s chair. 20

To be continued...21

Author notes

The violin of Audric beaumont inspired by night wish's the siren as well as theater of tragedy and sin of thy beloved's The Mournful Euphony, and of course midnight syndicate's XIIIth hour. I got my inspiration from all the evil violin books out there as well as the cold weather and how much I hate it. I made a background for this story only and I just manage to upload it.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1gxLNQLMA-8 and
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6N7AISAdpaI

Also just in case love to say once I get back within the mood I will make more parts to this. I have just yet to figure out what going to happen after.LOL

Option V -- Mythical Creatures # 2.

Option 1 drac
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  • Lady Pixie Greeters member
    September 25

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    This was amazing and beautiful and dark... I'm utterly at a loss of words right now

    The background is also very fitting and gorgeous for the item. You did an outstanding job with this.

    Thank you for entering the contest

    Pixie




  • Bella Corday
    April 16

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    I love the flow and descriptions in this piece. I have to agree with MetalheadX, the name Audric is really cool. The methods of death were well contructed and original. This is one of the most interesting pieces I have read.


  • Dr. Psycho silver member
    April 6

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    Nice background. Audric is a cool name! but It seems like a Poe and Lovecraft story. Great job! thanks for entering!

  • wow very Edgar Allen Poeish. I loved it! So dark, twisted, and ominous. Beautifully written!

    • thank you it was intended and geared towards such a thought. Then again ominious background music does help make the tention and ideas develope faster.


  • Bloody-Ink gold member
    January 18

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    very creatuve and descriptive!! It dwells deep into a troubled musicians soul, telling us that music can inddeed kill. Very creatuve, and good luck in the contest.


  • Kagamine Rin
    September 26, 2008

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    Congratulations! Very creative; with many well written paragraphs and proper grammar. I personally liked this, as it was a different type of genre then which I have read. I loved it.

    Music can kill...

    Good luck in my contest


  • Valkyrie silver member
    September 19, 2008

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    Hm. Your imagery was very detailed and specific, and I was able to get a very good feel for the creepiness and cold that you aimed to create.
    It was really hard for me to get into the story though, because you used nearly no punctuation within your sentences, and they read like you were just blurting them out in a rush, which really ruined the mood you were trying to set, at least for me. Also, you've got really big paragraphs, and each one could easily be broken down into several more dramatic, small, short paragraphs that would also enhance your story.
    It's a good story though, and the clock image was pretty cool. Thanks for entering my contest.


  • Prodigious.Mirth
    July 29, 2008

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    I loved the little piece at the start it seemed to tie the whole piece together in such a way that was so beautiful, so dark yet enchanting and the story was much the same I loved it. It was just the right length... I love the background but the blur strained my eyes which would be my only problem.

    I also get inspired my music and books

    GOOD LUCK
    THANK YOU
    Blair

  • marleedanger
    July 16, 2008

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    The blue text is a terrible strain to read and I probably would've stopped but I do enjoy an excellently written psychopath/serial killer. The words flow so well and the sentence /Foolish thinking that it would end differently then any of the others/ is creepy on a level I can't describe. Plus the background is hauntingly beautiful.


  • WritersEffigy gold member
    July 4, 2008

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    Oooh, I like it, a very unique idea.
    One spelling error, I assume it was carved out of "Mahogany" not "monogamy".
    Thanks for entering!


  • Naive.
    June 27, 2008
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    Very original. I like the idea of this; it's definitely something I've never thought of before. I believe you wrote this very well, but a few paragraphs are a little "chunky" and make it difficult to read. Might want to change that, but if ya don't, it's all good. This piece is still great.

    Thanks for entering my contest and good luck!

    -jj


  • Reaver Greeters member
    June 17, 2008
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    Already commented...scroll down. Read it again and felt the same way. Thanks for the entry

  • Reaver Greeters member
    May 14, 2008

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    loved it!

    This was amazing. Very well written. My only suggestion would be more paragraphs. SOmetimes their length confused things. And as for the contest...unfortunately, oen of the rules was less than 1000 words. So Sorry, but i can't award you. I am very glad i had a chance to read this though. You have an amazing power of terms. The way you word things is almost poetic. I love the pictures...especially the clock! WOnderful Amazing work! ~D


  • Fizbop
    March 5, 2008

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    One comment the backbround clases with the words I can't see them i had to highlight this to read it. Other wise very well written.


  • xBitterxSweetx
    March 3, 2008

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    This was well written and the imagery was lovely. I do have to say that the background is awesome but I can't read the words unless I highlight them. You may want to consider changing it for other editors. Otherwise, Great Job and Thanks for entering!


  • Miss Hanako Cullen
    February 22, 2008

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    A very good story..though I must say I had a terrible time trying to read it. Your words seem to blend flawlessly with your background..might want to change that. lol.

    Wonderful, Good Job!


  • Andy Stephenson gold member
    February 1, 2008

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    Good Story!

    I would suggest making the paragraphs shorter and using several spaces to separate the different narrations from each other. I think it would also be good to have a little more clarity when you change point of view. There are also some grammar problems.

    I think the concept is good and original. I enjoyed reading this. I think this and the plot you've outlined to me are quite good.

    Before a vowel, you should use 'an' instead of 'a'.

    Andy

  • parntsoftwins
    January 18, 2008

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    I must say this is the start of a wonderful horoor story, yet I suggest re-reading it and some spell check! There are quite a few grammical errors and spelling errors as well.I thank you for entering. I enjoyed the story line and the concept of it! As I said I just suggest some more proof reading, and possibly not repeat some words as much as you did. Thank you for sharing this tsory in my contest! ~Nikki

  • the shorty
    January 13, 2008
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    woah... creepy. Excellent descriptions.
    Thanks and good luck in the contest.

  • parntsoftwins
    January 12, 2008
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    Which option did you choose to write on? Please put it in your anotes, thank you.


  • forevermyangel14
    January 12, 2008

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    i liked all the descriptions. i thought it was a little slow, and that it would be easier to read if you broke it up into more paragraphs
    it's an interesting story
    thanks for entering!

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