the night we met!!

"well why dont you sit down and talk to me for a while" he said, so i did. he was so kind and so cute that i couldn't resist his offer. but when i got up to leave he grabbed me by my arm and pulled me against him, and i could already feel his arousle hot and ready against my stomach.1

"hey what the hell do you think you're doing", i yell at him. but instead of getting a normal answer he brings his moist hungry lips to mine. to me and i hope to him it was the most drugging, passionate, and caring kiss that i had ever had. it also gave me the most amazing feeling, no sensation ever.2

he pulls away and i let out a little moan of protest. but instead of walking away like i expected he takes my hand and leads me to a back room and once we are in it he closes the door. eagerness stirs within me, even though i hardly know him. he takes care in slowly removing my clothes. wasting no time in doing so he kisses each part of me that he exposes as he peels away my layers of clothing. i didn't know what to think or what the hell i was doing but i had no self control anymore. it was like he was controling every sensation and emotion i recieved from him.3

then my turn to slowly torture him comes and i delight in doing so. i begin with his shirt sliding it off and kissing his bare chest in the process. then i take of his shoes and socks and pants. then last but not least his boxers are the only thing left keeping from the one thing i knew could give me so much pleasure. i dont know how i knew this i just did. carefully slipping my fingers into the waistband and sliding them down his long muscular legs while i take his cock in my mouth and pleasure him more than he had yet to pleasure me.4

rythmically moving his manhood in and out of my mouth he throws his head back in exstatic pleasure. when he comes soon after i take full possesion of his essence. now jealous that he had not yet done the same for me he pulls away and lays me down flat on the floor. he comes down upon me and slowly begins his kisses and caresses down my wanton body. when he finally gets to my most private place i am already aching and wet for him to enter me. but he was taking his own sweet time.begins by massaging my place with his fingers, then his begins to slide his tongue in and out of my crevice, and then i can feel the most explosive orgasm building in me.5

i feel myself loose all control at last when i come with an earth shattering orgasm. he has by far been the best i have ever had.as if knowing what i want without me telling him or looking at me he enters me hard.deeper and deeper he goes, thrusting into me with such intensity that i feel i could cry. i could feel another orgasm biulding in me, and in my opinion it was all to soon,but it didn't come as soon as i thought, the feeling of such pleasure i was getting from him started to leave and i cry out in frustration.6

he tells me not to worry and then turns me over onto my stomach, gentley lifting me onto my knee's as well. then he starts thrusting into me from behind and this time i know i wont loose it. i feel like i am no longer on the earth. i feel like i am in another planet made just for us and our pleasure. and he keeps on going deeper and deeper into me while he carresses my breasts at the same time, leaning on me. i feel lost in a world i have never been to and never want to leave again. and with one last forceful thrust he delves into me so hard and right that i fall down with him still on top of me. i was no longer able to move at all. i was so sated and fulfilled and still wanting his drugging embrace that i said " i want to vanish again,please", and without hesitation he says " sure why not" with a cocky smile. that in just a just a short while i have come to know and love with all my heart.7

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  • ZorroTheFox silver member
    January 12, 2005
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    wow, I'm really starting to enjoy all the erotic stories and poems. I hope I"m not getting too annoying with all the posts but I'm trying to get all my reading done in one night.

  • C J Weatherholt
    November 13, 2004
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    This is good like my boyfriend (the above) stated, but it seemed rushed and hurried. It was so short when it could have taken so long. Good job with this one, keep up the good work. Much luvs~Crystal (I LOVE YOU JASON)

  • SouthernCowboy
    November 13, 2004
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    i like it i like it a lot but where the end i was getting in to it and it just stops but if your not done with it sor far so good jason

  • AngelOfMusic44
    November 7, 2004
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    darling when i said clit, that was for a guy going down on a girl, not a cock entering her and just so u know i edited it. from clit to crevice.

  • SapphireMoons
    November 6, 2004
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    WOW hunny great needs more work and i agree with volleyball9 keep up the work and the way you like to write

  • huneebunee
    November 3, 2004
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    Verrrrry sexy. I enjoyed this piece a lot.


  • CrimsonFlower
    November 3, 2004
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    HAD ME HOTT

    HOLY HELL i loved it itwas awesom i think you could add another story to it to continue the sexual experience but i really loved this story keep it up
    ttyl~jess

  • Miss Faerie
    November 3, 2004
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    i agree with the above comments. You started off well and created a great image, and then all of a sudden you just cut it off and ended it and it was over without total development and i think you could have made this into a really awesome piece.
    I was also bothered by lack of caps and spelling errors, but that's just cause i'm a stickler for such things in my own pieces.
    I think it would be awesome if you edited this to extend it and create development and show who he is and why she loves him and such.
    Good work non the less

  • ripbiggienpac
    November 2, 2004
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    It is a good start, but it doesnt seem like you finished it. You just cut it off. But good write.

  • macandrew
    November 2, 2004
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    good

    You have a good start to a story here but I was bothered by the spelling and lack of caps. Keep writing, you are off to a good start.

    John

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