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Growling she pulled at her chains, tugging at them, trying to free herself from her tight bonds. She settled down onto her pillow at the throne’s feet a small pout of frustration at her predicament played over her full red lips. Chewing on the lower one thoughtfully she pondered how this came about. No one could chain a goddess… well so she thought… 1

The gold from her wrap sparkled and shone in the dim candle light. A scrap of material really decorated with glass beads and light gold chains from the middle of her full breasts to her hips hung loosely showing off her flat belly small jewels crested her arms and legs while her circlet sat perfectly on her forehead. Least he let her keep that. All of her bottles where gone. The door to the throne room swung open and a tall muscular figure approached slowly. Eyeing this male with contempt she snarled as he grinned. 2

“Awe, Inanna or is it Astarte now? Look how far ye have fallen fair goddess of love and war” laughing he knelt in front of her and played with the chains upon her silks. Taunting his prize pet, he nodded to the guards; Dismissing them from their posts. 3

Quickly they fastened the chains to the floor pulling them taunt so that the hell cat they held could not lash out for their commander. Once their task was completed they left quickly knowing all to well that any slack would be rewarded with a lashing from Apollo’s whip. 4

Alone now, he tugged the chains at her wrists and ankles, forcing her to lie upon the pillows as he fastened the chains. She would be his, but first she had to submit. Whispering in her ear his hand moved to caress the fullness of her breasts twisting the nipples and rolling them into taunt peaks as she lay there growling though unable to hide her body’s reaction she quivered beneath his touch his breath hot and silken upon her ear “ why do ye fight me so pet? I want only to give ye what it tis ye yearn for most.” He licked playfully upon her lobe “what tis ye need to live” 5

She turned quickly snapping her teeth together almost catching a mouthful of cheek before he pulled away. Chuckling to himself he sat up upon his haunches spreading his legs slightly as he lifted his tunic to his waist. Taking his length in palm he stroaked slowly at first taking pleasure in the way her eyes lighted not with fear but desire as she watched him harden. A soft pink tongue darted from time to time to moisten her dry lips while she watched with rapt attention as his hand slid down his length. 6

She knew she was being taunted, teased tortured even. How long had it been since she fed? Too long, licking her lips she watched as his hand stroked over his tip; now glistening and moist. 7

Growling she tore her eyes away from his flesh snapping her teeth together and thrashing against her bonds. Somewhere she heard the echoes of his laughter mocking her attempts but it only caused her to fight the bonds more. A hand stroked up the inside of her thigh and her skirt was raised. The taunting hand flicked over her clit playfully as a finger dipped inside to be removed slick with her sweet tangy juices. 8

A soft mewl escaped in protest as he pulled out from her. Her hips rose to try and prolong the contact, the feel of his fingers deep and probing inside of her moist channel. Followed by a growl at how her body betrayed her once he was fully removed from her. 9

He moved to lounge beside her a hand stroked up her soft flesh covered only by the film of silk. Creamy smooth and satiny soft, her skin was something he never could get enough of. The other continued to stroke his member, throbbing and swollen with need. He only tormented himself further by continuing his sweet tourture of her body. Now cupping her breast his hand squeezed and rolled the aready taunt peek between fingertips. 10

Mewls and purrs erupted from her lips, followed by low growls. She knew wanting her captor was wrong. She tried to fight her nature, but Anu Help her she could not resist reacting to his touch. Wanting to caress his flowing muscles and dig her nails deep into his unmarred back. 11

Pulling his hands away he crawled over top of her gasping as his length came into contact with the flesh of her thighs to settle in behind her. Wrapping arms of steal around her he held her to him by hips and breasts, as he thrust his hips into the round softness of her. Welcomed by the warmth of her juices he continued to torment her pulling her hips back in to him. Wanting to make sure she was at least physically ready for his intrusion into her most scared of places. 12

Mewling, she almost begged him to enter her, the torure was all but more than she could take, rolling her hips back she tried to guide him into her failing as anytime she would come close he would pull back. 13

Slick and covered with her he tested her entrance slowly at first pressing softly but firmly inside, the sheer heat and intensity of her almost made his spill his seed at once. Her hips bucking back onto him drove him to the brink of his control. Still he pressed inwards till buried fully inside. 14

He stopped allowing her tight channel to adjust to his size before picking up a slow teasing pace. Slowing down almost to a stop when she tried to force him into a faster pace, but alas his sweet torment of his pet could only last so long before he gave her what it was she sought, for after all he was but a man.15

Picking up his tempo drastically he thrust into her yielding flesh over and over, quicker, faster, harder, ramming her hips back onto him. The dominance of his nature taking over, he bit hard onto her shoulder growling as her screams of bliss echoed off the walls around them. Feeling her climax growing in the squeezing and clenching of her inner muscles he let loose of her breasts to snake his way down to her clit; flicking over it rapidly in time with his hips. 16

Her crys grew louder as her body shook with release the clenching and drenching liquid spilling over his sensitive flesh brought him to the brink of climax unable to hold back anymore he bit harder onto her shoulder, roughly dragging her hips onto him as he let loose of his seed. Slowing to stop, he felt her shudder with after socks of bliss, a panting purr flowed from her lips coupled with mewls. 17

Now spent, and his Pet stated for now he pulled from her with a flick over her clit before standing, a lazy smile crossed his lips as he licked her juices from his fingertips. Rising to a shaking stand, he blew her a kiss and left her. A low chuckle sounded from him as he herd her mewl already she wanted more, craved it needing it more so now that she had had a taste of what it was like to be fed by one that knew the ways of one of her kind.18

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  • PurpleMushroom
    January 18, 2008
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    intresting

    ^^ i enjoyed it altough the goddess reminged me of a cat ^^'?


  • Shiki
    January 16, 2008

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    Hello sorry for the late viewing was a little busy. ALright first of all thanks for joining my contest! I'll be a bit harsher at contest so here goes.

    First of all a spelling mistake "Mewling, she almost begged him to enter her, the torure was all but more than she could take, rolling her hips back she tried to guide him into her failing as anytime she would come close he would pull back."

    Torure? Okay well over all the story is good, the sex part but hmm...sadly wasn't intense enough perhaps lol Well I said I do have high expectations for erotica^_^ haha but it was okay quite well done But maybe cuz of another thing, I got confused a little about the character. Especially about the female goddess. I don't really get about her although the descriptions was well done well done I enjoyed reading this story overall though ^_^ A great write but i hope you could write more hehe

  • HoneyAngel
    January 12, 2008

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    Wow, this was very good.

    I enjoyed it greatly... Slightly confused about why she needs to be fed, but ya' get that.

    Well done,


  • sctb2002 silver member
    January 6, 2008
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    Good Job

    The story is captivating....
    Unfortunately their are many grammar errors,
    Also, It sounds like he moves to her clit from her breast while he is still inside her.
    Unless he is a contortionist, this is impossible. Spelling is A+
    Good luck in the contest.
    Love Ya, MOM


  • FantasyFable
    January 6, 2008

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    Wow, this was good I enjoyed reading it, well done and I cannot see any spelling mistakes or grammar errors but quite frankly I was not looking for them, I was to interested in the story, well done excellent write and good luck in the contest.

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