I am better than you. I am better than everyone else. I have accompliced more than you. I am more attractive than you. I contribute to society more than you. I am more athletic than you. I am smarter than you. I am more talented than you. I work harder than you. Now I will tell you why I am all of thoese things.1
First I'm going to tell you how hot I am. Firstly I can pull off any look; prep, gangster, emo, jock, or just regualr. I have my jet black hair, beautiful blue eyes, full lips and the cutiest demples you've ever seen. But if you saw me before you'd see my beautiful face you'd be stunned by my gorgeous body. Not only is my body always styling with the hottest clothes underneath all the glamor is a cut, lean muscular body. You will be amazing by my perfectly formed six pack, and if that's not enough to attract you then the single fact that I seriously enjoy and love holding hands, deep talks, cuddling, and tickle fights will. I am also an amazing lover. You will want me, deny it or not. As hard it is already to belive this, I'm accually not egotistical at all, I'm accually a very sweet, and kind guy.2
With the body that I have it's usually to find any brains in there, but they are there. With my 3.8 GPA as only a Junoir in High School I am not only book smart but I've already micro-managed many small projects and buissnesses. I am also a very ferious individual and I have very differnet way of looking at life and issuse in life. I play Dr. Phill to many people, I know how to handel pressure and stress. My first year on the Newspaper team I am a major player as the Opinion Editor and, only at half way through the year, have alreayd secured my place as Editor and Chief next year. I show great leadership skill. I'm a very deep and emotional person, yet strong and firm at the same time. I have quite the sense of humor as well, Im halarious.3
I have lettered in 4 different sports and had a succesful career as an amurature boxer. After lettering in highschool Football as a wide reciever and lineback, wrestling as the 152 pounder, cross country running times in the 18s, and track going to state and running a 49-50 sec 400 meter dash, I went 2-0 in my amurature boxing career, which is still on-going. My athleticim and conditioning is unparalled by anything you can ever throw at me. My heart and drive to win will, and cannot be beater or broken. I refuse to loose. I swoar above obsticals.4
Finnaly I am very multitalented, not only do I excell in school and sports but I am also one of the better unheard of writers in the country receiving the Editors Choice Award for a poem of mine in a national contest. Not only do I greatly excell at writing but I am also musically talented. Playing in a fairly succesful band I am lead guitar/back up vocals. Everything I seem to try I excell in, period.5
I am a winner. I am the best there is, was, and ever will be. I am the Great One. I am Andrew Michael Orem.
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for a contest
A contest entry
- Why are you better than everyone else? by Melli.
230 points, ended January 11, 2008, 5 entries
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Haha.
This is adorable =P
I usually would wack people on the side of their heads if they said stuff like this, but you're Andy. And this is for a contest. I forgive you XD.
<3
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You might be better than some of us at those things, but you can't spell half as well.
Anyway, I think this contest is (and no offense...) a little bit weird because you're trying to make yourself look good but I just can't see the point... what exactly are you trying to prove besides the fact that you are "better than others"?
Anyway, interesting indeed.
I guess in a way it is a good contest (on the contrary, haha) because you are trying to persuade people (using writing techniques) to believe in something that you may not. You may think you aren't hot but you might actually be and you know, that can be hard to do. Trying to realise your good qualities can be challenging at times.
Well done.
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stroking ur own ego again, don't see how this would count for much since you're only showing the icing and not the burnt cake. You can't really pull of those looks and everyone gets a letter in football. Why'd you only stay with them for one year? There is in no way that you are better than everyone/
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That's all wonderful, but you can't spell.
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i no, i suck at spelling
lol, too many ppl are OCD about spelling
im srry if it takes away from teh accually writing
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"the cutiest demples you've ever seen." its supposed to be dimples, not demples.
"But if you saw me before you'd see my beautiful face you'd be stunned by my gorgeous body." It would sound better without the but in the front of the sentence.
"well, Im halarious" its spelled hilarious .
Well, It's an okay entry. It didn't flow that well though, but good job, and good luck.
KEEP WRITING!!!
-Melli<3
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LOVE IT...so raw
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