Ch 1 of The abnormal adventures of Jim Aiden: Stuck in the past

Chapter one, Two minds don't think alike.1

Don't read this story.. turn back now. Well, It's to late. Your mind is in the words allowing your eyes to travel across the page hope that I tell a story. I got a good one for you I believe.
In fact, it's a true one. My story doesn't talk about a brave hero or a handsome knight. It's speak of an adventure and a quest through the eyes of a teenager whose both good and evil. I'm talking about Jim Aiden. I can tell that you're wondering what makes him good and evil. Well, he wasn't always Jim Aiden. Infact, before the age of fourteen and thirteen, he didn't exist. It all started three years ago in a lab in the middle of nowhere. There stayed an old man and his two sons. The old man had always told them to stay out of the lab.He mostly had to tell Andy. Andy had always been the one to do awful acts. Yet Gary, the other son, was always the one the stop him. One morning, Gary was watching Tv when he heard a thump. He walked over to Andy's room. Usually when Gary goes any where near his room, Andy yells from where ever he is to get away from there. Gary did hear his voice, but it wasn't close at all. He walked around for ten minutes listening until he heard where the voice was coming from. Then Gary yelled out,"Andy, get out of the lab!"2

He raced down the basement lab steps and almost tripped when he saw Andy in front of a large tub filled with green liquid. "Andy, what are-" Gary looked at his eyes and saw a red gleam which he found to be very abnormal. He twitched when he heard footsteps rushing down the steps behind him. "Gary! Andy!" Screamed the old man. "You both are in so much- Andy don't touch that!" With a huge wrench in his right hand, he threw his arm back and ran toward the green tube. "ARE YOU CRAZY!" bellowed Gary running toward him. With a large scratchy voice Andy screamed, "HELL YA!" and banged at the tube. A couple more bangs on the glass of the tube and it let it's acid out whipping the right half of Gary and the left half of Andy away. The old man fell to the ground with the shock of what just happening pushing on his shoulders. But, being the mad scientice that he was, he thought of a idea. "What if I combined Andy and Gary?" So, he set off the work on the bodies and that's when Jim Aiden was born.