Time Crime: Prologue

Time Crime:
Prologue1

Have you ever wondered why? Why is it that if time travel is, or will be possible, why you, in your day and age, in your-- time have not found traces of it? In our infinite wisdom, we have applied our scientific, mathematical, and historical skills to so many things, we’ve made the world such a better place with the things we’ve done. Why has some time and space traveler not come back in time to you to undo the “done”s that the human race has done to make the world a worse place? Civil wars, massacres, world wars, bigotry, hate crimes, terrorism, slavery, child labor. Why has some hero not saved our lifetime, our century, our millennium, our infinity? Because most people would agree that a simple change in a simple action in most circumstances could reshape the face of history.
Hi, I am Adam, officer of the Time Crime Investigation Unit, and I’m here to tell you why that hero doesn’t exist. I must also tell you the story of the man who violated the Time Crime laws. Mr. Alpha Ruby.

Hey, thanks for reading. I hope you all like it, and if you do then I may continue. This is an idea in its simplest form right now. Please comment!

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have 0. (?) (Line numbers)
    Ratings:

Comments


  • Shadows Falling
    September 14

    Edit | Reply
    Neat. You must have put a lot of thought into this. It was really to the point, and it shows a lot of promise. Please continue, I'd like to read more!!


  • Eternalsyn16
    September 12

    Edit | Reply
    definatly to short. You need to write more of this, any idea is worth the effort, and this one has alot of potential. Ive read your other stuff, and would i be wrong in assuming that your more of a forward writer? That you like to just come out and say things instead of shrouding everything in half meanings and keeping everyone guessing until the very end? I like it alot, it's a nice change from some of the stuff i read. I like reading your stuff. Thanks (^_^)


  • water-spirit-ryuu
    January 3
    Edit | Reply
    Personally, I think that the first paragraph is a little long, and may do better broken up... but, I have a short attention span and like things in smaller doses, ^_^.
    I want to hear more about this idea though, it sounds so cool!
    please write more

    Water Spirit