Opening Paragraph To "The Power Of A Choice"

When one hears of the stopping of time and space it is usually taken lightly and with little regard. Surely even in the most intense instances there could not possibly be a moment where time and reality fails.1

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Option #1 Link to story: http://storywrite.com/story/130071

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  • LostSoulOfRage
    January 1, 2008
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    WOW

    tnx for entering the contset first of all.
    this is amazing! i absoultly loved this paragraph. i loved the last line the best. this is just truley amazing. now i want to read the rest of the story! anyways amazing job really! good luck in the contest and keep it up!

    -LostSoul