He has left me here chained up for about 2 days.I hate when he does that.He would come around every couple of hours and tease me.Just to piss me off.I am chained,hungry,horny,and i have to piss.He said he would let me off in a couple of hours,but that was a cuple of hours ago.Now im assuming he is at work.And he fucking left me here.Oh wait the door opened!And he just came in with another man.i hope he does not exspect me to screw anybody.He is walking behind me and unchained me and helped me dress.my mustles hurt from being in that position so long.he told me to sit on the couch.1
his friends sitting on the chair diagonal to our t.v.,im on the couch right in front of it,and HE is standing in the door way that leads to the sex room and the kitchen.He tells me who the man is and why he is here.HE wants me to get a job at an underground strip club.I personally dont want to but th other man says im perfect.I cant say no or ill be in trouble,but im mad because what about my other job?Anyway his friend leaves and he looks at me with a sexy crooked smile.And comes over and kisses me,which is nice because usually he is agressive and out for sex,but this time he softly grabs my hand and leads me to HIS BEDROOM.We never have sex in his bedroom,always in the sex room.I mean we LOVE eachother but we have our relationship and our sex.Two hole different things.2
So anyway he takes me and softly lay me on the bed and kisses me.He actually strts kissing down my body.he slowly slips off my shirt,then my pants.he un does my bra and kisses from my mouth,down my neck,and to my breasts and nipples.he caresses me and hugs me.he pulls down my underwear.he takes his hands down to my pussy and plays with my clit for a moment then sticks his finger in and starts fingering me.he finds my g spot and starts playing with it.he stops compleatly and comes up and kisses me again.a very pasonate kiss.i wanted more.he undes his pants and takes off his boxers.he kisses me again and sets me in a missonary position.he looks into my eyes and slowly enters me.in a very sexy,careful way.3
he builds up speed and becomes a little more agressive in each thrust,but never ever getting too hard or in his usual "dominate" way.We were making love.It was nice.Nonetheless i orgasmed 5 times that night.He came three.It was great4
A contest entry
- ADULT's Competition by Syrean.
300 points, ended March 20, 2008, 9 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I liked the first part better, But this goes to show you both sides of the story. One thing I would definetly change, The background color...Just because its killing my eyes!


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GOOD JOB
YOU DID A REAL GOOD JOB AT WRITING THIS STORY. THIS ONE THOUGH SEEMED A LITTLE SHORT AND NOT ENOUGH ACTION. ANYWHO JUST WANTED TO SAY GOOD JOB AND I HOPE TO READ MORE OF YOUR STORIES SOON. -
i loved it but the grammer was not that good but the story was pretty good
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i liked it.... but it was to rushed this time around, it still tickled my fancy but not enough to make me let of that steam..

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I'm not sure if you read the rules, but this isn't really what I wanted. If you fix up the grammar it will be a good story anyway, but it's not what I was looking for.
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Good
It shows the tender side of the S/M relationship and how tangled the edge between passion and pain really is. It all boils down to love but not in the traditional sense.
beginning: 4, language: 3, plot: 5, ending: 4, dialog: 4, characters: 5.
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