Your Love's Like Open Heart Surgery

You hold my heart
In your hand.
But you just don't
Understand.1

For your love I'd
Live or die,
And you don't seem
To care why!2

[chorus]
You're love's like
Open heart surgery.
It just cuts me like a knife.
You're love's like
Open heart surgery.
Am I gonna lose my life?3

You fill my heart
With so much pain.
Your cutting words
Drive me insane.4

You reach inside
With icy hands.
Such deadly love
Who understands?5

[chorus]
You're love's like
Open heart surgery.
And I've no more left to give.
You're love's like
Open heart surgery
Release my heart; let me live!6

Author notes

This is my song entry for Land of Confusion's New Year's Contest. You can see the cover art I created for the imaginary band I wrote this song fore at: http://fc03.deviantart.com/fs18/f/2007/182/2/d/Raw_Onion_album_cover_by_HeatherRoseBrown.jpg

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  • Edeyn
    January 3

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    Hmmm

    I'm even hearing a sort of alternapop-techno sound behind this in my imagination.

    It reminds me of something, but I don't think I know exactly what, yet.

    The cover art is, well, kinda creepy, but up to your normal standards of excellence.

    Do hearts have layers, like onions and ogres?


  • Yung Walrus
    January 2
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    not bad tis a good song


  • Elisabeth Greeters member
    January 1
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    Wow! I thought what an odd title at first, but you're right it does fit.
    It's very good and I can hear the music, a bit loud, but definitely with a beat!
    I like this, I wonder if it will get some music someday?
    Very well done, Heather.
    You got this little old lady tapping her feet!
    Lis