Waiting

A forlorn kiss is a sky without sun, moon or stars that
looks down through foggy midnight clouds, feeling the
innocence of my longing for romance.

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  • EnigmaticMonday
    January 21, 2008

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    It was once said to me that romance is what you make it to be. One doesn't need fantastical shows that all can see. I've had some deeply romantic dates, not because they cost a lot, or because they followed the rules set down by fairy tales, but rather they were with someone I loved. Find someone you love and each instant with them has the potential of being romantic.

    Am I too much of a romantic to think it is so?

    E-M


    • Demington
      January 23, 2008
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      Nonesense, you are perfectly right.

      Romance is a creature of habit, a monster of the imagination, a stormfront of effort...

      But most of all, I see romance as that childish innocence I hope to maintain, that playfulness that brings a smile...

      • Darianna
        January 27, 2008
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        I hope you find someone with the same view as you Demington dear! I'm sure you'll never let the romance die as long as you have breath in you!

        • Demington
          January 28, 2008
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          You needn't worry. I breathe romance. Though sometimes I find it hard to breathe.

          Usually when I'm swimmming. Or playing hide and seek...

          • Darianna
            February 15, 2008
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            *smiles* I believe you are romance in human form.

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