"Look me in the eye and tell me you love me," She whispered as she felt a tear ran down her face, "if you can."
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eye, love, feel
A contest entry
- : Take a Second and Come In! (Read it ALL or do not enter!) by Taylor Renee.
500 points, ended January 6, 2008, 48 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Comments would be nice but so are kangaroos and I don't get one of those
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That sentence speaks a lot.
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Wow
Full of feeling and loss. Very powerful.
DarkOne -
for any1 else reading this, it was for a contest where I could only write one sentence
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short.....vary short...but good^.~
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