On skin a soft and gentle touch,
A mind that never asks for much,
In palm a hand to hold me tight,
And keep me there with all its might,
In ear he speaks of lasting love,
A kind I feel from up above,
I hold him tight and pray to stay,
In arms I never want to leave.1
A contest entry
- A Third Poetry Contest by Melissa Loves Jeffy.
175 points, ended December 30, 2007, 23 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest - I Want STRONG Emotions!!! by I Dare to Dream.
900 points, ended January 24, 2008, 41 entries
Honorable mention
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Thank you all for reading and for your support. I hope you will continue to read my work ^_^
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very deep very touching (as the person below me said) and a very good read. I hope you win in the contest you will really deserve it
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This was so touching, and very sweet. It was for sure a pleasure to read. Awesome job, and the best of luck in the contest
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Awww this is so pretty and sweet. I hope he never does leave you. Thanks for entering and good luck in the contest.
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