Lists of Life to bring to death. ( Poem )

Silence1

As the silence reflects off of a lonely lake, 2

Crumbling it into ripples of Sorrow,3

The heart will fall and crack, then break.4

Agony5

The agony drenched in darkness rather then light,6

Look into it your eyes will squint,7

What is wrong turns to right. 8

Love9

Love just leads for you into a trap,10

Hate and jelousy it fills with,11

A unforgivable wrath. 12

Pain13

Feeling the Pain curves me to cry,14

I cant live on like this,15

I wont even try. 16

Revenge17

When my revenge fullfills with satisfaction,18

Touches me like Ice needles,19

My most beautifull reaction.20

Death21

Death draining feeble life from your veins,22

Clock ticking to your demise,23

Blood flowing as it rains.24

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  • Melissa Loves Jeffy
    December 29, 2007
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    hmmm i commented this one but storywrite says i only veiwed it...Strange...

  • Melissa Loves Jeffy
    December 28, 2007

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    This is a really amazing poem. its can be somewhat true somtimes. But there are different kinds of love. How about family. Is there love filled with all of that? Great job and keep writing!!!