Silence1
As the silence reflects off of a lonely lake, 2
Crumbling it into ripples of Sorrow,3
The heart will fall and crack, then break.4
Agony5
The agony drenched in darkness rather then light,6
Look into it your eyes will squint,7
What is wrong turns to right. 8
Love9
Love just leads for you into a trap,10
Hate and jelousy it fills with,11
A unforgivable wrath. 12
Pain13
Feeling the Pain curves me to cry,14
I cant live on like this,15
I wont even try. 16
Revenge17
When my revenge fullfills with satisfaction,18
Touches me like Ice needles,19
My most beautifull reaction.20
Death21
Death draining feeble life from your veins,22
Clock ticking to your demise,23
Blood flowing as it rains.24
A contest entry
- A Third Poetry Contest by Melissa Loves Jeffy.
175 points, ended December 30, 2007, 23 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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hmmm i commented this one but storywrite says i only veiwed it...Strange...
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This is a really amazing poem. its can be somewhat true somtimes. But there are different kinds of love. How about family. Is there love filled with all of that? Great job and keep writing!!!



