Hello my name is Jessy.1
My therapist told me to write.2
Where should I begin? Well I have always been in control of my life, yet each new day that arrives I feel my mind slipping away. I'm losing control, but you don't tell the doctor that, they will lock you up.3
Wait, wait, shhh, did you hear that? I hear her she keeps telling me my life is over. That they can't fix me.4
Man I itch, I can't stop scratching. I think it's the medications.5
You know Keith hasn't come home yet from work.Since we moved to this new house, he has been working alot. Plus there's alot of other people living here, Keith hired them to help me. The place is pretty and bright.Lots of white, I think it's to make the place look bigger.I like my new bed it's comfortable.6
Oh yeah, when Keith gets home I have to tell him about one of the ladies. She is a little scary, she acts funny, and they put her in a special jacket sometimes. Maybe he should fire her.7
Boy he works alot now, it must be to pay all these nice ladies.8
Oh, one of the ladies said it's time for me to rest so I don't get sick, but Keith isn't home yet. He must be working late tonight again. I asked the lady she said I will see him soon.
Nichole A.Dustin
12/25/2007
Author notes
When someone is truly insane they did not know.
The original version of this story before I shortened it for a contest.
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My mother taught me if you have nothing nice to say, don't say it at all. Here for fun please respect that as I respect you. Thank you.
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Intersting, very intersting. I feel a little insane sometimes, especially when I see or hear things other people don't, maybe I am insane? Who really knows? Anyways, great write.
xoxo julia -
Nice POV! Insane people rock don't we? I saw one or two grammar problems that I wouldn't worry yourself over though. But in any other case great!
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