How complex,1
The way the world runs today.2
No room for relaxation,
No way to fit it.
But when will you realize;3
You don't have to try.
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dont *have* to, thanks.
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Its short and even though it is a poem it seems to lack the aspects I look for in a poem. Its short and to the point however and really leaves no questions in the end. I like the concept but I'm not sure people should really try and live up to it since 'you don't need to try' can mean anything from not bothering to get a job, to not living if applied to a particular situation. Thank you for entering my contest and good luck.
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Interseting... quick and stright to the point...
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You should never have to exlain what your poem means. Every poem means something different to everyone. That is the beauty of poems. That is what your poem says to me ; )
I like It!
Regards,
Shelle -
Nice. I like it. Very simple and well put. Good luck in the contest!
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Hmm...I don't think i quite understand this but it sounds cool. Could you explain it to me. It's good though.
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