Santa's daughter

Twas the night before christmas 1

and all through the north pole2

Not a creature was stirring3

not even a mouse. 4

Well then again I'm not a mouse5

I'm santa's daughter. 6

Santa maybe asleep all day dec 26th7

But i'll be hitting the malls 8

Flaunting all the wonderous gifts my Papa gave me9

I'm rich like a gingerbread cookie, 10

but I look more glamorous. 11

I'm beautiful like the angel ontop of a christmas tree12

But I'm definitely not that innocent. 13

I taste as sweet as a candycane14

I know you just want a taste. 15

but baby i'm like a jackpot16

only one person can have me. 17

My kiss is as sweet as a snowflake,18

and I can be as warm as a cup of hot chocolate19

Frosty's my pal, but I can't bring him inside. 20

Rudolph snuggles up on my bed, and keeps me warm 21

but if you're wondering about the elves, 22

they're cute for little people, but I take after my dad. 23

who is as cute as a button. 24

So if santa claus is cute,25

then his daughter must be hot

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  • heartfullofvenom
    February 26, 2008

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    ha, really cute. I love the fact that it doesn't sound innocent at all. More like the Santa's daughter you want to love. A great write for sure.

    ♥


  • Melissa Loves Jeffy
    January 31, 2008

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    This poems pretty sweet. Its good to have some self confidence but I would never beable to have this much. I try to be modest lol. This is great. Thanks for entering and good luck in the contest.


  • So Strange Greeters member
    December 30, 2007

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    This is really kind of funny to say the least, Angel. I especially loved the last two lines, because they really make you think and they're funny at the same time.

    Keep up the great work, Angel. I think you have a talent that hardly anyone can match and it seems to be a mixture of just about every genre, including comedy, romance and just really anything else.


  • Melli
    December 27, 2007

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    HHAHAAHAH Loved it, it was funny, and i liked how it started out. Great peice! I think i know who wrote this hahaha great work, and good luck babe!

    KEEP WRITING~!!!!

    -Melli<33


  • Shiki
    December 27, 2007

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    Lol omg! self praising! Lol but a well done poems with wondeful descriptions! Lol aww I like it very nice Lol well done Lol

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