Arya Chapter 1

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Glass shattered into millions of pieces, as I crashed through into the long hall. The glass glowed like coals in a fire. My long purple hair flowed behing me. I held my sword with two hands, it pointed out to my right.1

I ran at inhuman speed, faster than ever before. I still could not catch up with that ass Eli. Eli was near my home, which he wasn't allowed to be. My mother, before she passed away, had given me permission to kill that damn boy if he came anywhere near me.2

Eli had killed someone in my family, and no one in my family knew why. No one outside of my family believed Eli could do such a thing. They didn't see the blood on his hands and face. They didn't see his cold smile, as he came near me, then walked away.3

That boy obviously wants to die I thought to myself. I ran so fast, if people were looking towards the outdoor hall, all the would see was a blur. Eli looked back at me, and smiled. A fake, evil smile.4

Eli stopped running. I stopped also, waiting to see what would happen. Eli looked hard at me, still smiling. He stepped foreward, close to my face and said,5

"Have you come to get revenge on me for killing your idiot sister?"6

"You basterd!" I screamed.7

I swung my sword at his head, but he jumped out of the way. He knocked my sword out of my hand, and grabbed my arms. He wouldn't let go.8

"Get off me!" I shrieked. He brought his face close to mine.9

Eli's eyes locked into mine. His hot breath against my face, gave me an odd feeling. A feeling of fear. What I never expected to happen, did happen.10

Eli's lips touched mine. I didn't know why, but I didn't pull away. Eli was the one who gave me my first kiss. My sworn enemy was the one who loved me. I felt a spark of something as we kissed. I didn't even know what i felt.11

Then, Eli pulled away, and ran faster than thought possible. As I started to realize what I felt, I wished Eli hadn't killed my sister. I felt love...

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  • Silent Raven
    January 19, 2008

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    What A Bastard...

    OMA!!!!!!! I wonder what bastard gave you THIS inspiration.............Sam??? Your old bf???? who knows????
    Christa&Desi


  • xMomo
    December 26, 2007

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    "..which he wasn't aloud to be." Aloud should be allowed i believe. Sorry to do corrections first >_< This is a really good starting. I hope you decide to continue it. Your very talented. I love how they look into each other's eyes and she feels something in her stomach. I'm a sucker for love stories though xD The first kiss this is just adorable. good job


    • Beneath The Mask silver member
      December 28, 2007
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      thanks. It took me a while to figure out the plot for this chapter. I decided to make it a love story of a sort.