I got what the boys want
I show the bitches what they can't flaunt
With my sexy brown hair
and long eyelashes 1
I catch the eyes of every man who passes.
He be looking
and saying "daaayyuuuuum that's hot."
oh baby you know what I got. 2
I can make the colors of rainbow
Sexy, not gay.
The beads around my neck, oh baby
You know you can use them as a sex toy. 3
I already have cufflinks
also known as kandii
no need to restrain me
but trust me you'd want me to dominate you. 4
Delicious Lips
Yet a Devil Stare
oh baby, Eyes speak the language of lust5
Glowsticks are my ecstascy
and I'll make my dance moves your weed.
Raving is an addiction
and this little raver will make you hypnotized
Sex is on my mind &&
P.L.U.R is my lifestyle
lightshows are my aphrodisiacs &&
Kandii is my signature fashion 6
Dance with me
You'll fall in love,
My body's a treasure
and I know you'll want to hold it against me
I let loose, and attract you
I'm a raver, that's just what I do. 7
WOOHOO I'm DONE
Author notes
just incase you dont know PLUR is PEACE, LOVE, UNITY, RESPECT (the hidden r - responsibility)
Raving is something Im definitely passionate about I love it I can't imagine my life without it hehe. I may enter something else but heres my entry so far.
A contest entry
- Why are you better than everyone else? by Melli.
230 points, ended January 11, 2008, 5 entries
Honorable mention
• next story in this contest, remove from contest - Rain, rain don't ever go away! by Lady-Jane.
250 points, ended April 26, 2008, 13 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
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This could totally be a song. I kinda wanna boogey down now.
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That was awesome! Nothing more to say.
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awesome
what a flow xD felt a lil happycore hehe xD but i liked it ravers with good self esteem are the best hehe ^^
So keep up the good work aight? 
loved it!
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thats really good stuff you gots there thats all i have to say
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This is a good write!!!! I liked it alot. I wouldnt be able to write somthing like it thoe. I have a low self esteem lol. Great job!!! Keep writing!
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dayuuuuuum girl
haha, I liked this one, unique good!!!! I know probably close to nothing about raving, so this gave me a bit of info! thanks for a good read, and good luck in my contest
ily
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I gotta say the daaaaayum thing made me laugh. I think you did a great job of being the shit in this piece. I don't really know anything about raving but you showed some of it in this piece so thanks.
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Lol! Yea this is good definately! Lol sounded very addictive huh hehe a well done poem definately^_^ It rawkss Lol are you describing yourself girl lol? It does do the right appeal in terms of sex and beauty well done! yay cheers for you
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Sick as, for damn you should daaayuummm. LOL. Aniwais this was really good. keep it up i wonna go a rave on day.
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I like this..it's like a kick ass prose for girl who know how to flaunt it ith the right does of attitude and sex appeal... LOL
ROX GIRL --- blair
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