Standing in the corner I’m staring from the corner, right out at you whilst your inside standing beside me. Not that this can happen, not that this can be, it was never meant to be just you and me. I told you that and you did not listen, and that is why you stand bloody and dead beside of me. Because murder was sweet and my insanity was short and obsolete. Hush, hush my sweetie death is inside of the blade wielded mentally by me.1
A contest entry
- Insane yet? by Ninja Bubble.
100 points, ended January 7, 2008, 15 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
INSANE.
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Fun write.
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Oh, this is was awesome =)))))
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So u killed him. That was....nice. lol
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Wielded mentally by me? Unless he was fantasizing, ya got something a little mixed up. But other wise its great! I loved it, and i would never trade the seconds I spent reading this for anything!
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The blade weilded MENTALLY by you? o.0
Amazing...really. You did a fantastic job in showing insanity, and I believe you even turned the reader insane!
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Tnks Siby. Oh no I need a white jacket for you too then?
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I've already got one. But I ate it >.>
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