He put the sparkle in her eye, and it was his kiss that created her smile.
Author notes
100% a girl but 0% girly girl cause that's me. This is my last entry , I keep entering because the words you gave can be used in so many different ways and work so beautifully together
A contest entry
- : Take a Second and Come In! (Read it ALL or do not enter!) by Taylor Renee.
500 points, ended January 6, 2008, 48 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This made me smile, and actually gave me that nice tingly feeling in my tommy. I love that!
You used the words very nicely, and you worded it perfectly
Overall, very nice entry!
And thank you for the author's notes
I'm glad you think the words work well! I was hoping people would like them!
Good work, thanks so much for the wondeful entries and I wish you the best of luck!
xoxo
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Tay
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