Kiss,butterfly,heaven

The dark kiss of death took from me the translucent butterfly sitting in the tree I call my little piece of heaven.1

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Girl. Its me again. I really like your contest because its fun to come up with these sentences and it pushes me farther than I could push myself.

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  • Taylor Renee
    December 26, 2007

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    Wow. I love this one because of the fact that if you read it and read it, different things will hit you. You can imagine the different ways this could happen, and the imagery is great so you can picture it differently each time.

    You used really nice wording again, which I of course love.

    This sort of makes me want more. I think that's a good thing! It really makes me like this.

    And, of course I enjoy the fact that in each of your entries you follow all the rules AND tell me a different reason for why you enter

    Great work, again, and thanks so much for taking the time for my contest!

    xoxo
    -♥-
    Tay