He is a fly on the wall in his own home. 1
He's been everywhere except where he is right now. 2
He has visited the Sun but he's never touched the moon. 3
He took a trip yesterday, only to return two days ago. 4
In June, he wore a raincoat for next year's May showers.5
He waited in line at the front door. Slowly and surely he noticed the building's windows and the little cracks in the sidewalk....They all remined him of that girl he met on that trip....6
The one's whose picture is on his wall now...from that magazine article...
Author notes
Kinda weird, eh.
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Oooh and insane stalker guy thing. This was great! You have a knack for getting into the mind of a psychopath dont ya know! So I say....
KEEP IT GOIN!~Z -
Yes, very weird! I didn't get it, what was it about, exactly?
beginning: 1, language: 1, plot: 1, ending: 1, dialog: 1, characters: 1.
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Amazing
Very cute! For the first four sentences you might want to change the first word. Make it not all the same :3
Great! Loved it!
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