"Jonnie, wake up!" I woke up immediately and sat up. "Jonnie, you sole my liver..." "Holy Crabby Patties that scared the living bajeebas out of me!" "Jonnie I'm serious I'm gonna kill ya!" All of a sudden there was a loud, TAP! TAP! TAP! at the window. I lifted up the curtain and screamed. A green lady stared at me; the lady had looked like my mum. Was I going insane? First the strange voice that said something about a liver, then the tapping at the window, then my green mum! I must be going insane.
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- Insane yet? by Ninja Bubble.
100 points, ended January 7, 2008, 15 entries
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Well it was a little odd... Doesn't make much sense, but I suppose I didn't even give that many boundaries eh?
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Hmm...interesting. Not bad, but not GREAT, either. You should write something more serious that people would actually want to read, and make it longer than a few lines.=)
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