I lied blood-pooled on the floor, hating that damn bullet, cursing the night sky. He came before me, showed his barrel, and showered me in light.
A contest entry
- 23 words. by asthray.heart.
146 points, ended December 26, 2007, 20 entries
Honorable mention
• next story in this contest, remove from contest - 10 sentances or less ; anything by Melli.
170 points, ended February 15, 2008, 22 entries
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Comments
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My reaction of getting shot would be echoed through my mouth as your title of this piece would come flowing out. Good luck in the contest!!!!!
Ted E
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awesome write, amazing how you described it! Just amazing! Thanks for entering, and good luck.
KEEP WRITING!
- Melli <33 -
This was really goood, beautiful words.
Tnks for entering and goodluck.
~EBBexile. -
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Scared me but damn it, Z, it rocked.
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